Naturally Artificial

i am on a something
pirouetting in a nothing

around a great ball of fire

just a small piece of nature

in between transcendent disaster's

breathing my share

while i can

making love in the rain

chewing on animals

worrying about volcanos
recycling plastics and doing taxes

playing video games

jerking off and getting wasted

feeling ecstatic

feeling ashamed 

and everything in between

i will call it experience 

and i will fill the time

how i will fill the time

that is. . .

anyway that one can

naturally attained 

induced artificially 

they are one in the same

within a nature

on a something

pirouetting in a nothing

around a great ball of fire

in between transcendent disaster's

Author's Note

Reviews

[LKBillips]

This one is really good. A very transparent view of the human condition in this day of age. Nicely done.

[Davidgeo]

Thanks. It's one of my most very favoritist ones, I'm glad you liked it.

[Andrea Greene]

Woah. You've made this almost a teasing balance between philosophical and, like you said, artificial. I cannot find the words to express how much I love this piece.

[Davidgeo]

Thanks holmes. I find nature in balance sometimes.

[Resa]

I like the style of your writing.
It's got a little bite to it, not too much , to the point of sounding forced as so many others.
Very nice read!
Thank you !
Resa

[Davidgeo]

Thank yous. It's hard not to sound forced while biting things.