Diesel Punks

in a grimy seat

underneath a yellow sun
from atop a war machine

in between violent noise
and the scent of gasoline
dressed in broken glass

and dirty chrome
in between twisted metal

burning ever brightly

on taboo thoughts

and rusty dreams

just about to die 

as it always lived

as a filthy mind

in disrepair

from the wasted lands
from the forgotten places

they are the diesel punks

the living endings 

Reviews

[H L Rose]

I'm a fan of this. I like the imagery and even though I don't understand every aspect of it, every line does seem significant.
"the living endings" is definitely an intriguing ending.
I enjoyed reading!

[Davidgeo]

Its just something I crapped out after smoking a bunch of weed and watching mad max.

[H L Rose]

Welp, I still enjoyed it!

[Davidgeo]

You should smoke some grass and watch Mad Max and then write something... it might not make sense but I bet I'd like it.

[H L Rose]

Nay on the grass, but perhaps I'll look at Mad Max

[Davidgeo]

Grass is good by I understand your reluctance. Watch the Tom Hardy Mad Max... the Mel Gibson Mad Max is BA as well but the newish Tom Hardy one is more visceral and, diesel punk. It's literally directed with dieselpunk as it's visual theme. Charlize Theron only has one hand.

[H L Rose]

Good to know. I'll be sure to keep my eye out for the right one.