Mind and Body Strong Grasshopper

Mind and Body Strong Grasshopper

A Poem by Davidgeo
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my mind is very sore
from exercising
on the regular
all of the bad memories
that forged me
into me. . .
like the lactic acids
that flood my tissues
after an hour or so
of some very vigorous jujitsu


"you can't grow without burning"
-- Arnold (stay hungry)

© 2018 Davidgeo


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Jeez. I liked this. Don't know why.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

It's the Arnold quote... Arnold's f*****g fantastic (for the most part).
I like the Arnold quote. The rest of it feels more like an "I work out and am really smart so have sex with me!" elaborate paraphrasing. lol But I think the Arnold quote kind implies you were at least a little aware of it but then again.... lol

Posted 6 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Or, how about... making mental and emotional gains can make you mentally sore like vigorous exercise.. read more
First poem I can recall reading with an Arnold quote. Very cool.
-Richard

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard McLin

6 Years Ago

I agree. If there were more "GET TO THE CHOPPA" in poetry, it would be more popular.
Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Ever hear of a band called "Austrian Death Machine"?

It's the finest Arnold Schwarzen.. read more
Richard McLin

6 Years Ago

No, But I'll check it out.
Events that forge us (as a rule) happen in a flash then we spend forever polishing their existence. I can see these words in motion.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Some unfortunate memories are born from single moments of trauma... others can be from long term in.. read more
Cherrie Palmer

6 Years Ago

Agreed, those people who can rise above that and shine are amazing
Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

It's inside everyone I think, situations often dictate the degree of difficulty in extracting it tho.. read more
No not me now
I get lactic acid just walking up the stairs to bed

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

That's not a good thing.
Wild Rose

6 Years Ago

Used to run marathons >>> That was 60 years gone
Now learned to take things steady

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