No Things Or Continuous

It is either death or continuous

Some things here we cannot experience

Maybe no things, maybe more things

Some questions remain always precarious

Maybe one life, maybe myriads

Some ends may indeed lead to the ethereal

Maybe finite, maybe infinite

Some questions remain always contrarious

Maybe starlight is our birthright

Some things might be borne to always return

Maybe dying is just transitioning

It is either death or continuous

        Like a phoenix or just ashes

Author's Note

Reviews

[Gee]

Ain’t got the brains to comment on your writing but the tune was top notch. Haven’t heard that in ages.
Death=crem’= insurance payout for the good lady =well hung stud in my pyjamas= “God, what have I been missing all of these years”

[Davidgeo]

Sure you do. It's about exactly what it sounds like... is there anything after death or is there nothing.

Thanks for making laugh... that last part of review was pretty funny.

[Gee]

Cheers, hope you are well

[Nipplegrinder]

Go home, Dad. You're drunk.

[Richard McLin]

A lot of questions in this piece, and they are all questions that I think everyone eventually asks themselves, or their therapists, or their gods, or someone higher. This piece really makes you think about time, and how truly finite it is, and is there anything after. I myself don't believe so, I believe when it's done, it's done, but that is just me. For those who believe we are reincarnated that's cool, I'd love to come back as a highly enlightened Star Baby like in "2001: A Space Odyssey", but I don't see that happening, but I digress.

This is a great piece, very intelligent, and well written. Nicely done.
-Richard

[Davidgeo]

I believe the last moment of consciousness stretches out for a relative eternity in that dying individual's mind. Like Einstein's description of relativity... "When a man sits with a pretty girl for an hour, it seems like a minute. But let him sit on a hot stove for a minute and it's longer than any hour. That's relativity."... and as much as I hate to mention a legit sexual predator Kevin Spacey's closing monologue at the end of American Beauty still sounds right to me.

[J. B.]

I enjoyed this work and your take on the subjects at hand

[Davidgeo]

Subjects? It's about one thing... the uncertainty of what happens after we die. Did you even read this?