Ratatoskr

Language is the code in which we use to expatiate upon reality

While we have not yet elaborated that code fully

To elucidate the human condition completely

Language is the best code we have to expatiate upon reality

Author's Note

Reviews

[Anise]

Language is fascinating. Ever changing, evolving.
I wonder if emojis are setting us back a ways?
Like cavemen drawing on caves
Technology's influence on communication, that would be an interesting discussion.
Is it helping or hurting us. Probably both.

[Davidgeo]

I think it's cyclical. Groundbreaking advancement's might be misused at first, maybe hurting a little more than helping, but over time I think we've been good as a species at adapting to change and making things eventually help us more than hurt us. But who really knows? Todays circumstances have never been observed in any form before... all these damn computers man, and artificial intelligence... consciousness is in the process of being completely redefined.

[David-Tyler]

Where's the substance? I read it, and I was like "Hey! Where's the poem?". I understand your message, but there's no impact. You gave me no reason to care.

[Davidgeo]

Hmm... what was the message do you think? I'd love hear your take on it. The other stuff is just nebulous filler to sound critical. I'd also love to hear your opinions on "what a poem is or is not".

[Richard McLin]

Haven't read many poems about language, and this one is going to make it hard for others to do it, cause this one mastered it. Great piece.
-Richard

[Davidgeo]

That's some pretty high praise. Thanks Richard.

[Resa]

This is so true!
Very good point

[Davidgeo]

Thank you resa... I appreciate your kind words.

[AYVID N]

"we used to"
but don't we anymore? Communication is rampant. There's more of it than ever was before. Or are we on our way to being the Tower of Babel? All speaking in their own language, no one listening to anyone...?

[Davidgeo]

No, I definitely meant it the why I wrote it. Language is a code, and we use it to describe our reality and become self aware. What kind of sense would it make to insinuate we aren't using language anymore? That would be a patently false statement ya crazy lady.

[Davidgeo]

Ha... I meant to type "the way..." not "the why", kind of ironical....sorry, I've been smoking grass all morning.

[AYVID N]

its perfectly fine :)

[Anjali]

Hmm... Nice! I really liked this. The rhythming scheme is also good. Amazing!

[Davidgeo]

It's not amazing dude. I don't think it's s**t but it certainly isn't amazing. You don't need to be generically polite. Say what you feel, my ego's overinflated anyway... we all lose a little something when we pander.

[Anjali]

I really liked it and I'm saying the truth... Everyone have different opinions, I guess.

[Cherrie Palmer]

So much of who we are is summed up in how we communicate. I liked the way You have expressed this.

[Davidgeo]

For some reason this all came from an old Viking story about a mythological gossiping messenger squirrel. I wish I was making that up.... Ratatoskr is pretty much exactly that according to the mythos. Norse mythology gets pretty f****n' weird sometimes.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Never did like that squirrel

[Davidgeo]

Come on now, that squirrel is everyone's guilty pleasure. We wouldn't have such complex and nuanced language without gossip. That squirrel is a pretty good representation of the internet these days... damn it... I wish I thought of that while I was writing that stupid Viking squirrel poem. Eh, maybe next time.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Here's to next time.

[Davidgeo]

Indeed....