Not Really Worthy of a Title

San's regret

Life is perfect

So maybe I'm cancer

But at least I'm descriptive

(blame the human condition)

For my presence 

And all of my insults

I can't make this s**t up

Nor would I change a god damn thing

(life is perfect)

Some love is hatred 

What paints the other side

(is the difference)

And nothing to be afraid of

Author's Note

Reviews

[KWP]

and the first thing that came to mind was my Kundalini Yoga session this morning - totally relatable :D

'Nor would I change a god damn thing
(life is perfect)'

not many people can say this convincingly - love that

no nothing to be afraid of ... what are you reading lately ? It suits you X

[Davidgeo]

You don't wanna know. I don't even make sense to me most of the time.

[Davidgeo]

...lately?

[Aesthetic Trash]

I love the description and the formality of the poem itself. I find it to be intriguing in a distinctive understanding.

[Amy]

You did a great job at writing this. It shows how no one is perfect and you should accept things the way they are.

[Cherrie]

I see the wheels spinning a wheel within a wheel. You make the reader wonder

[Davidgeo]

That's high praise... thanks Cherrie. Wonder is a wonderful thing to instigate I thinks.

[Cherrie]

it is a poet's first and best job

[AYVID N]

This really touches a chord.
It takes a very perceptive individual to love hatred, revel in the smell of s**t. For most of the cretins that pass themselves off as humans, its all about face value. I wouldn't change a thing either.

[Davidgeo]

Everything in nothing.... I think everything is beautiful and that is very difficult given what I've seen. But I still do it. Do you?

[AYVID N]

It depends on the mood. On the milieu the brain cells are bathed in. All is pretty when the serum is sweet with xanax. Other times, maybe not so much.

[Davidgeo]

Xanax makes me retarded and meaningless. I only smoke grass for all that ptsd bullshit now. It works just as well without muting my personality. (which some would say means it doesn't work just as well)

[AYVID N]

To each their poison :)

[Davidgeo]

Some people just masturbate their way to happiness... others build model trains. I prefer high end prostitution.

[AYVID N]

Knowing this world the way I do, there is worse, there is much worse...

[H L Rose]

I think the meaning of this one might be lost on me, but I’m gunna give it a shot because I really like the meaning I personally got.

I derived importance on the understanding that the way life happens is the most perfect way for it to happen. A confidence and appreciation for the way one has grown.

My favorite line is the last line “and nothing to be afraid of”.

I enjoyed analyzing this!

[Davidgeo]

The meaning is irrelevant. It always is with me. That you thought at all about it in your own way is all I could ever hope for.

[H L Rose]

I’m glad !