Page 364 (that's attraction)

Page 364 (that's attraction)

A Poem by Davidgeo
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the first formal definition

 desire

the second

     formality is not what it seems

in definitions

lie's hide in generalization's

failure

 disastrous fairy tales

expectation's absurd

            is 2.b

  meet-cute; recovery

patience in shadow

among masturbation material

  dark thoughts

hopeful dreams

  mislead creatures

the third one 

 pleasure in temperance

in waiting for better judgement

  a discipline

she does augment desire

  listen

be quiet

  die

the end is ugly

  save for nothing

         please

plan accordingly

  that's attraction

© 2018 Davidgeo


Author's Note

Davidgeo
"... when they are all grown up: they are indifferent whether desired qualities or structures have been acquired earlier or later in life, if the full grown animal possesses them." Chuck Darwin


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Interesting read .... you point out all the possibilities.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

That's impossible. Pointing out all the possibilities, I mean.
Hebe

6 Years Ago

lol.... I agree, of course within the context of what's going on .... pain asks the questions....
Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

I smoke weed for that.
I thought the end of the poem was good.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Did you now? Thanks for reading it.
Hockeygirl

6 Years Ago

You're welcome.

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