Up Close

Up Close

A Poem by Davidgeo
"

. if you look too close, you will find that nothing is there .

"

up close

you can never really see yourself

in the nuance it takes to live

by the second

frame by frame

microscopic

breathing in every instance

in the flesh. . .

    we never do miss a beat now, do we?

with super computer brains

processing singular moments

over and over and over again

   but  different by the second

normalized

in concert with others

    variable upon variable

stranger upon stranger

over and over again

different, but only always just barely

in the moment, just before the next one

you can never really see yourself

up close

© 2017 Davidgeo


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A lot of folk imagine Scotland is all about harsh accents, Haggis and Kilts and Rob Roy running amuck; but Scots do have have a gentler more intellectual side, as A.A. Milne so ably proves.

Beccy.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Don't forget about one of the most important philosophers of modern human thought... good old David .. read more
Robert Burns sprung to mind as I read this.

Beccy.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

I'm actually kind of a fan of his. Scotland doesn't get enough intellectual respect.
Yes nice one. It's all an interpretation yes? We catch only a glimmer of the now - but even that's an. Untruth .

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KWP

6 Years Ago

OH s**t no - I use a Mac ...
Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

I will leave the interface instructions on laser disc, and will mail it to you... just like it was 1.. read more
KWP

6 Years Ago

You are too good to me :) '92 was a great year for me :D
I suppose not. And most certainly a fascinating thought.:-)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Look closer when you can.
Jackie

6 Years Ago

Looks like it was shot from someones hotel. Look like also destroyed or pulled holes and rhe structu.. read more
Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

It was shot from a condo high rise in Syria circa 2004 or 5ish. But I wasn't talking about that one... read more

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Added on December 4, 2017
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