Commercial Break Probably

Commercial Break Probably

A Poem by Davidgeo
"

.certainly uncertain, only one thing is constant.

"

frustration is a real tool

used to refine the reality

and deal with the irreducible

nature of a temporal existence

"it's good training" (or something just like it)

if pursued very cleverly

if you don't ask too many f*****g questions about it

 (chuckle chuckle)

we all ask too many f*****g questions, about everything,

even sometimes for a living,

or just as an a*****e. . .,

or planned evil.

          (just for funsies)

so anyways,

on the subject of reality. . . time and space --


at the smallest interval of time, what do you think happens?

is there an end to the past or a presence becoming a beginning to the "right now",

incarnate?  Is the transition a real thing?  Can you feel it?

How specific is this whole "space-time" thing anyway?

I just cant stop thinking about this. . .

Some where along this irreducible line

Of the immutable and fluid;

The past into the present,

Conundrum upon conundrum. . .

Is there ever a specific point,

Where everything turns irreducible,

into a single thing or a moment?

Is there A when/A where the past becomes the future directly through the present. . . is that moment even a thing?


in space and in time. . .  how far am I allowed to see?


at the smallest location in time, what is it the f**k you think happens?

(a commercial break probably, most likely)

             it is certainly uncertain, said a dude named werner

some people can see further, said a fellow named edward

© 2017 Davidgeo


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Davidgeo

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The answer lies partly in the poem itself. We ask too many f***ing questions. The human brain is probably not wired or evolved enough to perceive the transition. Perhaps it could have, if in the course of evolution it hadn't become full of s**t. As it has sadly come to pass, most people cannot see beyond themselves, hence the f***ing questions. Enjoyed this one.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

We need a more powerful magnifying glass or something like that. It still won't reduce things, ulti.. read more
Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

There is no answer Divya



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Absolutely wonderful. I enjoyed this piece.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Are you sure though? I don't think this kid can write very well.
MaximumFlight

6 Years Ago

I'm very sure it is. And also, every piece is different and this one is very interesting to say the .. read more
The answer lies partly in the poem itself. We ask too many f***ing questions. The human brain is probably not wired or evolved enough to perceive the transition. Perhaps it could have, if in the course of evolution it hadn't become full of s**t. As it has sadly come to pass, most people cannot see beyond themselves, hence the f***ing questions. Enjoyed this one.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

We need a more powerful magnifying glass or something like that. It still won't reduce things, ulti.. read more
Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

There is no answer Divya
Maybe it's all just light, or the absence, thereof.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

Maybe this is all the transition of light back into darkness. It would be nice to assume the opposi.. read more

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Added on November 28, 2017
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