Entropy 2

The prize divides us

The loss perverts them

The win distorts us

Yet the world remains

The ends will shift

We all change places

The prize dissolves

The thing that made us

  Will always kill us

The cosmos rolls

 Order will fall

We always will lose

It all must come apart

    That is nature, welcome to it

          "Things fall apart; the centre cannot hold"
     ---- thank you, Mr Billy B Yeats

Author's Note

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

well, hell, now I'm depressed.

[Davidgeo]

If there was no ending how could we possible enjoy the beginning and the middle? Don't be depressed, be happy to be alive while it lasts.

[AYVID N]

A cosmic truth, an inevitability stated powerfully, with no flounces, no frills, driving home the despair of of it all.

[Davidgeo]

You're too nice to me.

[AYVID N]

I'll try to bad to you in my next review :)

[KWP]

It must all come apart - and yes that is the nature of it - I have thought about this very fact a lot - a lot - we live in a finite world in a finite universe - and we still fight and struggle - what for? What for? Consciousness has separated us from the everywhen - we have given ourselves a touch of importance - I exist - see me - feel me - I'm here - but in the big scheme of things we forget to be in the here and now - for eternity does not stand still - and we have also lost the skill of being still within it ...

yeah - food for thought - nice one you X

[Davidgeo]

I really do enjoy how we come to similar conclusions with extremely different outlooks. That's kind of a rare thing.

[KWP]

I hear ya big dawg!