On the Border of Chaos and Order

On the Border of Chaos and Order

A Poem by Davidgeo
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we don't have to be opposite

just to be different


it is possible

i have seen it


when the world catches fire

facing desperation and ruin

on the border of chaos and order

we all tend be human

together and fast

despite all of our differences

in unison we would attack

all that would kill us


it is possible

i have seen it


in chaos

all kinds of humans

come together

though, in prosperity

we tend to get petty

with no common enemy

we turn on each other

blood for blood


it is already happening

we have already seen it

© 2017 Davidgeo


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Davidgeo




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It all seems so easy and yet here we are stuffing it up on a grand scale. Funny how life in community can live together in diversity and yet the big boys with their big boy toys always like to add petrol to the flames.

I am liking this one very much. You must have had a happy high :D X

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Like the message, like the musicality, the imagery, love that refrain! Well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We are rich in humanity when hard times fall and poor in humanity when good times call. Interesting sentiment and relevant in the world today.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It all seems so easy and yet here we are stuffing it up on a grand scale. Funny how life in community can live together in diversity and yet the big boys with their big boy toys always like to add petrol to the flames.

I am liking this one very much. You must have had a happy high :D X

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is quite an optimistic outlook on life. There is truth in the statement that on the verge of chaos we get a little closer to each other. I've seen it happen in my country as well, since the one that's next to us has active war going on, it made us different. Some, better. But a very insignificant amount. I suppose one needs to witness the dark side of humanity to awaken their own. I liked the thoughts this one evoked.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana B.

7 Years Ago

hmmm, we are profligate beings.I suppose that makes sense. In a way conflict is a natural course of .. read more
Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

Really? I was almost certain no one else here could possibly enjoy 'Blood for Blood'. Angry dudes .. read more
Ana B.

7 Years Ago

Yup, when i was in high school, which was eons ago, i loved listening to it while playing need for s.. read more

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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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