Safer Together

Safer Together

A Poem by Davidgeo
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salt is a tasty rock
but broken down. . .
you get a poisonous gas
and an explosive metal

© 2017 Davidgeo


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Interesting to think how all things are dangerous at some level. Take water, for example. We need to drink water to survive, but chugging too much water will lead to death. For humans, most of us are nice on a certain level. Yet, we still have the capacity to emotionally explode if we are tested at a deep level.

Great metaphor for humanity. Keep up the great work!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

Thanks Brent. I'm glad you dig it.



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So very true, Dave!!
Interesting how a tasty rock salt can turn in a disaster when dissociated.

Appreciable pondering, Very well executed 😊

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting to think how all things are dangerous at some level. Take water, for example. We need to drink water to survive, but chugging too much water will lead to death. For humans, most of us are nice on a certain level. Yet, we still have the capacity to emotionally explode if we are tested at a deep level.

Great metaphor for humanity. Keep up the great work!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

Thanks Brent. I'm glad you dig it.

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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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