repetition

A Poem by Davidgeo

. not a good poem, I really just wanted to use the phrase "mental desertification". i'll try harder next time .

repetition's weigh over time

as the struggle's mount

large and small

maybe death and destruction

usually balding and belt sizes

still one becomes, extremely disaffected

numb to causation, regardless

over time, all things mount

all things will succumb

to something

to a mental desertification

if their "lucky"

if they age "proper"

to qualify

for the ruining, the great forgetting

the old body and bed wetting's

as the old memories turn to bone collections

turn to dust

from past times

times tied to fading emotions

breaking

dissolving, waiting to finish

to be cleaned

to be ended

without funeral

senile and wandering

until completely forgotten

dead and dissolved

another repetition

in repetition with the next one

so, i'd rather die young

dissolved into aether

than long lived and very senile

all alone in a desert

waiting to fade

empty and forgetful

)I'm pretty high this morning.

f**k you dad

© 2017 Davidgeo

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Mario Vitale

Engaging piece really makes you think. Was surprised with the second stanz very nicely done.
A word of advice keep reading books on famous poets in the genre. Very good adaptation from reading. Most partial to the last line in reading it was never forced very good overall in reading.