manifest

realities sensation's

fool the eyes

faith in imagination

fools the mind

belief in chemicals

fools the body

contemplation

soothes the soul

motivation

resets the mind

dedication

wins the day

scotch whisky neat

helps unwind clean 

on any weekend

this is me

a human std

Author's Note

Reviews

[Phill Oz O'fee]

If you put a worm into a glass of water it will wiggle about and escape unharmed - If you put one into a tumbler of single malt; it will be dead in seconds! Moral: if you drink whiskey you won't get worms :-) Great simple write that just oozes smoothness - just the style I like!!

[Davidgeo]

Ha... nice. I'm always on the lookout for good reasons to drink whisky.

[Shy Joe]

When I sit thoughtless, staring at the computer screen, with not a creative spark scratching at the frontal lobe. That truly is a scary thing. Sometimes you have to "cheat" nature to manifest ideas. I don't smile, when I do it.

Thanks for sharing.

[Davidgeo]

Sounds like a very low rent Bukowski wrote that review. Maybe if you communicated normally instead of extra pretentiously you could convey useful information more efficiently. However, if you must go the faux intellectual route AND be taken seriously you might want to avoid making a spelling error in the very first sentence. Oh, and, you clearly didn't get the meaning of the poem... I usually don't mention it when that happens but I wanted you to know, for some reason.

[Shy Joe]

Just giving my opinion on the meaning of your poem from my point of view. Thanks for grammical error catch.

[Davidgeo]

I'm not being entirely serious... I just like to bust balls.

[Samyuktha binod]

this is motivating .. like the first lines are truth and then its like telling you to understand and move on. Its grand

[Davidgeo]

Glad ya liked it... thanks for your comment.

[A.L.]

Hah! I like a catchy poem with humor as well as depth. Gotta love some scotch whiskey, weekend or not.

Great write TK Little.

[Davidgeo]

Thanks Duffy. I keep forgetting to take the last line out. It's too late now.

[A.L.]

Don't. It fits perfectly.

[Davidgeo]

Well I won't then.

[A.L.]

Better not.

[This Guy (Again)]

Damn man! That's very powerful, love the flow of the poem and just the relating factor to it. Your poem started to bring names in mind of people I know that really loves their drink, some a little too much haha.

[Davidgeo]

thanks dog face

[This Guy (Again)]

No problem.

[Abraham George]

nice work. i liked it....