The Unsightly Man

The Unsightly Man

A Poem by Davidgeo
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with a reflection so f*****g ugly

that every night you rouse frequently

in terror you do this. . .

to look at your children, your family

just to be certain, they don't look just, like, you

© 2017 Davidgeo


Author's Note

Davidgeo
The Parable of the Hideous Man (by Thomas Merton/Chuang Tzu)

When a hideous man becomes a father
And a son is born to him
In the middle of the night
He trembles and lights a lamp
And runs to look in anguish
On that child’s face
To see whom he resembles.

From Thomas Merton's "The Way of Chuang Tzu"

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It's most likely irrelevant, but this reminded me of Clint Eastwood's '' Unforgiven''. This poem would make a great manga material. Btw, speaking of Westworld, i love that Ed Harris' character is called The man in black...so many interpretations can be attributed to him, and so many qualities...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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You had me at “F*****g Ugly”.
Magnificent piece. Raw. Gritty. Honest.
P.s love the ProfilePic - I am also a huge Westworld fan, can’t wait for season 2!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.

Westworld is one of the better things to come to the .. read more
J.L.Q.

6 Years Ago

I know! Maybe a designer will make a “host” Copy of him in a later season.
It's most likely irrelevant, but this reminded me of Clint Eastwood's '' Unforgiven''. This poem would make a great manga material. Btw, speaking of Westworld, i love that Ed Harris' character is called The man in black...so many interpretations can be attributed to him, and so many qualities...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yeah - that's pretty cool. or maybe I should say 'I like what you have done with the place'

who's this Merton fellow anyhow?

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

I refuse to believe that you do not already know who that Thomas Merton fellow is.
KWP

7 Years Ago

ok I will look him up then shall i ?
so the man is checking to see if the family does or doesnt look like him? firstly, i thought it was funny as hell. secondly, i thought to myself if the man wants his kids to look like him then switch the they dont to dont they, outside of that i have to ask is this a parody of the parable in the description box? funny stuff

Posted 7 Years Ago


Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

It's not really that confusing I don't think.

I re read and, yeah... pretty straight.. read more

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Johnsburg, IL



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