"because this is outrage culture. . .
and some fucktard thought it'd be wise
to make it the norm
to let young adults remain children;
spoiled and rotten
insulated and world stupid..."
This is my favorite stanza of the piece, i truly enjoyed the read!
This is so refreshing.. Thanks for sharing..
I'm part of this younger generation and I too struggle to understand my peers myself;
"and i will not pity you;
when they tell you,
that this is their "privilege",
and that equality's got nothin' to do with it."
A very true statement in my eyes.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
We are in a time of social chaos. It'll pass, it always does.
"because this is outrage culture. . .
and some fucktard thought it'd be wise
to make it the norm
to let young adults remain children;
spoiled and rotten
insulated and world stupid..."
This is my favorite stanza of the piece, i truly enjoyed the read!
Wow. Yeah that pretty much sums it up. I like how use use real life issue but don't bother to make it sweet sounding or colorful to spare the feeling of the reader. Raw, blunt, and true. Very good job. I am looking forward to reading more.
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Thank you. I think sparing the reader's feelings is a disservice, almost insulting. It doesn't alwa.. read moreThank you. I think sparing the reader's feelings is a disservice, almost insulting. It doesn't always have to be negative sounding of course, there's a fellow here named Ohioman that also holds nothing back, but in a very different way. You should check him out, he or she doesn't get read enough. I'm terrible at writing sweet sounding things. I've tried... it always sounds contrived or fake. I've kinda given up on it. It's too bad, I really would like to be a well rounded writer.
yep ..i feel you man ;} but i'm tired of it all ..treatment like Mr. Peterson received is deplorable .. its college .. a place that is supposed to be fertile ground for exploring ideas that may be different than those one holds ... nice hard hitting needs to be repeated poem
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Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
I don't know if I would make it if I went to college today. In the very early 2000's campuses were .. read moreI don't know if I would make it if I went to college today. In the very early 2000's campuses were very different. There was still a fair amount of protesting and activist things of that nature but it was different, more focused, better researched, better organized, and just seemed more genuine. These days it seems like these kids are just doing it to be fashionable and more often then not they aren't even making sense with their manufactured outrage. Outrage culture has turned into a silly trend for bored 19 and early 20 year olds. They are louder and more aggressive than ever before and I think it hurts more than it helps their credibility. And I can't be certain, but, I'm pretty sure Trump being elected president was a backlash to all this non sense. Not everyone who voted for that clown is a racist xenophobic moron, a lot of moderates said f**k this s**t... you want something to protest about? lets blow it up and elect a crass idiot.
7 Years Ago
yep ..and perhaps we did ..one can only hope that youth will learn that pulling up the boot straps c.. read moreyep ..and perhaps we did ..one can only hope that youth will learn that pulling up the boot straps can ones self is a satisfying and character building thing ... I am praying for Trump..and the success of our "system" ..the elections are over ..it is what it is eh!? top o' the mahrnin' to ya sir!
''ironic hypocrisy'' - that's f*****g awesome. A very dead on poem dear author, as usual, you don't pull your punches, but rather serve a naked truth that i can admire. Lazy beta b*****s lol, i like that.
I was raised by my very strict grandma and i thank my lucky stars for that, because whatever it's going on in the educational department of children, by parents, society and schools of course, well, that is sad and will result in quick downfall, honestly, when i think that the world couldn't be more fucked up, life ALWAYS proves me wrong.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
These types of poems usually get me a lot of blowback. They will call me sexist, racist, transphobi.. read moreThese types of poems usually get me a lot of blowback. They will call me sexist, racist, transphobic, abusive, a Nazi etc., etc... Thanks for not calling me a Nazi etc.. Your grandma sounds like an a*****e but I bet I'd love her.
7 Years Ago
Lol, i can only imagine.
My grandma is great, you'd love her, she makes the best food, and i.. read moreLol, i can only imagine.
My grandma is great, you'd love her, she makes the best food, and i don't really mix well with society, never really did, so she did me a favor. Of course, it took me years to get to that conclusion, but oh well, better late than never i suppose.
7 Years Ago
Don't feel to bad, society is just window dressing. At the end of the day everything comes back to .. read moreDon't feel to bad, society is just window dressing. At the end of the day everything comes back to family and personal relationships. If you have those, it doesn't matter what the world is. (usually)
7 Years Ago
Fitting in for a living is for idiots.
7 Years Ago
I'm not,i'm pretty happy with how things turned out, and you're right - family is in the center, al.. read moreI'm not,i'm pretty happy with how things turned out, and you're right - family is in the center, although i love my family very much i'm kinda the black sheep you know, too independent, too opinionated, always keeping my distance, which is probably wrong, but i like to stand and observe how the scene unravels from the distance. I'd make a s****y god lol
btw, i watched ''Corpse bride'' the .. read morehaha i'll borrow this line in my writing someday
btw, i watched ''Corpse bride'' the other day and i loved it, i love stop-motion animation films, have you seen 'Kubo'' ? it's good. And i love the cover of the Beatles ''While my guitar gently weeps'' there.
7 Years Ago
You can take whatever you like.
I had a feeling you'd enjoy that movie. read moreYou can take whatever you like.
I had a feeling you'd enjoy that movie.
And thanks for that Regina S cover. She's one of my most favorites but I still hadn't heard that one before yesterday. You have very fine taste pretty lady.
And thanks for that Regina S cover. She's one of my most favorites but I still hadn't heard that one before yesterday. You have very fine taste pretty lady.