Products of Awareness

. and other questions .

The product of awareness

Bends the light of actuality

Into an ideal, your reality

Your essence, your identity

A type

In the light of society

Or maybe the shade of your living room

　

you are this

        you were that

you are not that

        you've become this

Something

Or another

　

in the time that life has allotted you

in the direction that has become of you

is it yet anywhere worth pointing To?

Author's Note

Reviews

[SSSJW (super saiyan jus..]

Lmao, you even changed your about me... JUST FOR ME...? What are you even doing, bro, lmao... Then you changed it back... Yeah, good move... You like to do that, both with your thumbs up and comments... Deleting and ping-ponging between strategy after strategy... Dude, I even heard that in a rage, you started attacking people who comment on my work...? You are like some sort of personal "super-bot" that spreads my glory... Money can not buy people as devoted as you... Thank you, and like I said, I enjoy this... So... Take that as you will... I would rather much enjoy this never ending... It makes me feel like someone actually cares... You care, right? I mean... You will be sure to signify my affect on your level of caring by acting like a comic book villain, right? Women and children are the BEST for getting to the main-hero... Too bad I am more like an anti-hero, but...You know... Toodlez, Smoochems, till' next time...! (Quick question... Are you on other sites...? Cause I need a boost in popularity over in some other places as well...) Just get back to me whenever on that one, thanks, budz

[crispysloe]

Fantastic, since I last encountered you... You have done NOTHING but prove me right... Harassing woman after woman with asinine rage... Instead of being able to make any valid counter-arguments... You fell for the EXACT trick you proclaimed to use on Lyn and I.. Get baited, you sexist coward... Bet it feels real good to take that angst out on those who can not defend themselves... I rest my case... Figured someone like you would do the work for me... *Slow-claps*... But, like I said before, PLEASE, continue to troll me, troll others near me... PLEASE... It dedicates a level of energetic commitment I do not even get from my biggest fans... Keep proving you are my number one supporter, and remember... Having chosen me as your fixated god, my power will continue to increase as you menially cast stones before a great swell... L2P, you just lost, again, by your own hand... Predictable to the end... Toodlez, Darlin', and godspeed... I... I win. (Deleting my words now, eh? Have I really gotten to you THAT bad? The emails of support I receive about you... You might be my next step towards stardom)... I should probably thank you... I will not, cause you are nothing more but a stepping stone for those with real talent, but you know... I really should... I win, again and always, Darlin'... *Blows-kiss*

[Ana B.]

awesome opening lines. Makes one ponder over the actuality of truth, or whether the photon that that travels across the universe has the origins of time in it...or is the light expanded so much that we perceive a diluted version of it...

[Davidgeo]

Hello Ana. It's been a while. I'm glad you liked it.

[Behind blue eyes]

lovely piece yet again! I don't really have much constructive to add! x

[Hebe]

Hi TK
I just picked this amazing piece from your list. Marvelous job of expressing the questions nobody has yet been able to answer! :)

[Davidgeo]

That's mighty sweet of you to say. Thanks mang.

[Joey Nizz]

We are what we are, and others should respect that and accept it, everyone has their own way on what to be or who to be.

Thank you for sharing.

[Davidgeo]

Thank you for reading.

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome.

[Gee]

As a young, drink fuelled prick I was very much guilty of trying to be what I thought others would like me to be, ending up an even bigger prick. With age and experience I've become comfortable, happy in my skin, and give not a flying f**k to what others THINK they see in me.

[Davidgeo]

Gee you're a wise man.

[Gee]

I think my younger years were a subconscious effort to be liked as was a product of a twice broken home, foster homes, BUT, some funny times in others homes with my slightly loopy older brother.
With regards to the wise man, my daughter, 16, paints it as grumpy !!

[Davidgeo]

I'd say something about an abandonment complex but I wouldn't want to drive you away.

[Gee]

Lol, you may well be right. I'm 55 now and as happy as a pig in shite with my lot. Life is all good, touch wood, and long may it remain so.

[Davidgeo]

I wish you long indeed my friend... as long as can be.

55's the 45 so I've heard.

[Gee]

20 in the head, 70 in the bones.
Off to Nanny 40 whining carpenters, have a good day. Cheers

[Poetic Beauty]

Being this or that is labeling. I think we all should be who we are and want to be.

[Davidgeo]

I do very much agree.

[SSSJW (super saiyan justice warrior)!]

Lmao, you even changed your about me... JUST FOR ME...? What are you even doing, bro, lmao... Then you changed it back... Yeah, good move... You like to do that, both with your thumbs up and comments... Deleting and ping-ponging between strategy after strategy... Dude, I even heard that in a rage, you started attacking people who comment on my work...? You are like some sort of personal "super-bot" that spreads my glory... Money can not buy people as devoted as you... Thank you, and like I said, I enjoy this... So... Take that as you will... I would rather much enjoy this never ending... It makes me feel like someone actually cares... You care, right? I mean... You will be sure to signify my affect on your level of caring by acting like a comic book villain, right? Women and children are the BEST for getting to the main-hero... Too bad I am more like an anti-hero, but...You know... Toodlez, Smoochems, till' next time...! (Quick question... Are you on other sites...? Cause I need a boost in popularity over in some other places as well...) Just get back to me whenever on that one, thanks, budz