Friend-Ok

Friend-Ok

A Poem by Davidgeo
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knowledge worthy of remembering

i.e. people who stick around in your mind

forever and ever

sometimes as alibis for living

other times as avenues of destruction

feigning emotion

like vampires

maybe not always though

sometimes not at all though

© 2017 Davidgeo


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Davidgeo

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Lmao, you even changed your about me... JUST FOR ME...? What are you even doing, bro, lmao... Then you changed it back... Yeah, good move... You like to do that, both with your thumbs up and comments... Deleting and ping-ponging between strategy after strategy... Dude, I even heard that in a rage, you started attacking people who comment on my work...? You are like some sort of personal "super-bot" that spreads my glory... Money can not buy people as devoted as you... Thank you, and like I said, I enjoy this... So... Take that as you will... I would rather much enjoy this never ending... It makes me feel like someone actually cares... You care, right? I mean... You will be sure to signify my affect on your level of caring by acting like a comic book villain, right? Women and children are the BEST for getting to the main-hero... Too bad I am more like an anti-hero, but...You know... Toodlez, Smoochems, till' next time...! (Quick question... Are you on other sites...? Cause I need a boost in popularity over in some other places as well...) Just get back to me whenever on that one, thanks, budz

Posted 7 Years Ago


Fantastic, since I last encountered you... You have done NOTHING but prove me right... Harassing woman after woman with asinine rage... Instead of being able to make any valid counter-arguments... You fell for the EXACT trick you proclaimed to use on Lyn and I.. Get baited, you sexist coward... Bet it feels real good to take that angst out on those who can not defend themselves... I rest my case... Figured someone like you would do the work for me... *Slow-claps*... But, like I said before, PLEASE, continue to troll me, troll others near me... PLEASE... It dedicates a level of energetic commitment I do not even get from my biggest fans... Keep proving you are my number one supporter, and remember... Having chosen me as your fixated god, my power will continue to increase as you menially cast stones before a great swell... L2P, you just lost, again, by your own hand... Predictable to the end... Toodlez, Darlin', and godspeed... I... I win. (Deleting my words now, eh? Have I really gotten to you THAT bad? The emails of support I receive about you... You might be my next step towards stardom)... I should probably thank you... I will not, cause you are nothing more but a stepping stone for those with real talent, but you know... I really should... I win, again and always, Darlin'... *Blows-kiss*

Posted 7 Years Ago


Your use of words here really spoke to me. I like the thought that it is build around, the people who are such a continuous presence in our minds. Very nicely written.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

Talking words... ha. That made me laugh. I'm glad you liked it.
Thoughts get stuck in our mind. Sometimes people stick in our minds for good reason and sometimes for negative things they have done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

7 Years Ago

Smiles whatever works.
crispysloe

7 Years Ago

Fantastic, since I last encountered you... You have done NOTHING but prove me right... Harassing wom.. read more
Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

Ur embarrassing yourself wordman. Stop posting non sense with fake profiles.... stop pretending to.. read more

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Added on July 14, 2017
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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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