A Dick Shin

A Dick Shin

A Poem by Davidgeo
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what is addiction?

doing stupid dangerous things you enjoy more than life

and the mere existence of this thought... means there's something very fucked up about this reality

(or maybe that's why we're here, now. why we've even made it this far, to begin with)

© 2017 Davidgeo


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Lmao, you even changed your about me... JUST FOR ME...? What are you even doing, bro, lmao... Then you changed it back... Yeah, good move... You like to do that, both with your thumbs up and comments... Deleting and ping-ponging between strategy after strategy... Dude, I even heard that in a rage, you started attacking people who comment on my work...? You are like some sort of personal "super-bot" that spreads my glory... Money can not buy people as devoted as you... Thank you, and like I said, I enjoy this... So... Take that as you will... I would rather much enjoy this never ending... It makes me feel like someone actually cares... You care, right? I mean... You will be sure to signify my affect on your level of caring by acting like a comic book villain, right? Women and children are the BEST for getting to the main-hero... Too bad I am more like an anti-hero, but...You know... Toodlez, Smoochems, till' next time...! (Quick question... Are you on other sites...? Cause I need a boost in popularity over in some other places as well...) Just get back to me whenever on that one, thanks, budz

Posted 7 Years Ago


I felt pretty stupid when I realized the title is addiction out loud, haha. Addiction isn't fun (or is it?) if it's to something that's detrimental, yet so many people do it anyways.

As always, I enjoyed.

~Luna

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

I think the predilection to addiction is potentially both evolutionarily advantageous and personally.. read more
escapsim sometimes is a better option to numb the pain of life ...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

True... true. Some people do it with work, some people do it with exercise, some people lie to them.. read more
KWP

7 Years Ago

:D .... and I have a few good vices to lead me away from the here and now X
This is an interesting piece. The part where you mentioned loving addiction more than life reminds me of one of my favourite C.S. Lewis quotes, "If I find in myself desires this world cannot satisfy the only logical explanation is that I was made for another world..."

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

I really liked that quote... thanks.
Addiction is a subject close to my heart, although I have not personally been through it, I have lived with it. This was an interesting read and thought provoking.

Posted 7 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Sometimes to people love to go on a while adventure even though they know that they might not come back from it, but that even excites them even more for the challenge, it makes them feel more alive to do so.

You have expressed this perfectly in your writing, thank you for sharing :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

Ha... you've never been around one of the 7 summits have you? There, you have less control than you.. read more
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Joey Nizz

7 Years Ago

Unfortunately no I haven't, I really want to but the highest summet I have been to was last year whe.. read more
I agree with your words..some need an escape from reality and unfortunately many can't find their way back - or don't want to. A profound write. Julie

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

Thanks doll face

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