DogWater

knowledge holds court 'till certainty goes to pieces

then chaos convenes, undermines and holds sway

like a plant growing inside like an alien pregnancy

of self consciousness

inhumanly prego even old men can be

as uncertainty is completely equal

and age neutral

Reviews

[Tegon Maus]

Interesting... It creates a very fluid image. However, I'm not sure I would call it Dog Water. That brings a whole world of other things to mind ! Over all I liked it.

[Davidgeo]

You're definitely right. The title kinda sucks. I ran out of ideas at the end.

[Davidgeo]

Any suggestions?

[Tegon Maus]

Uncertainty ? Dog water is a great title... just not for this poem... think about Lucy and snoopy... a great title!