The Cafe Society

The Cafe Society

A Poem by Davidgeo
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nothing's forever cinderella

so it goes

 

the elite will run in packs

mantras

and heuristics

strictly adhered to

"thems da rules"

experienced in the wider public

as respect

enforced via shame


shame


f*****g shame


and other falls from glamour

into the ether

of relationships not to be brought home


but still treasured still remembered


fondly

 

like the nightclubs of the new york 1920's

between 15th and 16th street

between third avenue and sixth

socially transient to the core. . .


dorothy parker is still adored


in the café society

 something always very easily forgotten

yet still

    it's everywhere


like air

sans the rules

f*****g culture

filthy culture

sometimes remembered

or not so much

(it just comes naturally)

© 2017 Davidgeo


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Davidgeo

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Very surreal and aggressive, I really like this piece. I don't dabble too much in poetry and don't think that it's really up my alley but that doesn't mean I can't appreciate a good poem when I see one. My only advice: maybe get into the nitty, gritty details of the ancient, more bombast version of New York you were describing? If your goal is to be abstract then you absolutely hit it on the head but Im a fiend for details, no matter how dreamlike the sequence is.

One of my favorite poems I've read this year, though. Thanks for the chance to read it.

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Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

That's a pretty fine suggestion. If I ever come back to this I will re read your comment. Also, I'm.. read more



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Very surreal and aggressive, I really like this piece. I don't dabble too much in poetry and don't think that it's really up my alley but that doesn't mean I can't appreciate a good poem when I see one. My only advice: maybe get into the nitty, gritty details of the ancient, more bombast version of New York you were describing? If your goal is to be abstract then you absolutely hit it on the head but Im a fiend for details, no matter how dreamlike the sequence is.

One of my favorite poems I've read this year, though. Thanks for the chance to read it.

x

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

That's a pretty fine suggestion. If I ever come back to this I will re read your comment. Also, I'm.. read more

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