Blue Ruin

to ruin after a burning star
takes courage deep
and temperance far
when nothings dearer
than to feel her sink
her claws within me
intertwined
flesh mistakes together
consumed by a blazing star
her tendrils burning
a newborn feeling
will be my ruin
so deep within me
she tastes the hollow
of my neutron star
both cold and hot
i cannot flee
i cannot follow
i will not lead
you've seen my hollow
a skin so dense
but i still bleed
can you still see me?
within my spectrum. . .
for i am hard to see
it's such a chore
but i'm still here
completely blue
but i still hear you
and i always will

Reviews

[neurostar burns]

nice allegory! you kept integrity, and a lot of feel

[Davidgeo]

thanks lady face

[duff]

You can feel a hearts conflict. Vulnerable but standing strong. Wrecked yet repairable. The title is deep too. Well done

[Tabby Mac]

Love the science in this piece to describe the magnitude of love and its power. Well done! I enjoy this!
Tabby

[Davidgeo]

thanks for being sweet doll face