Hate Smelling

the mind's a playground
ya stupid stupid
idiot faced
b*****d

i have no regard
for anything that doesn't smell
just
like
me

so please
don't lie to yourself
everyone likes the smell of their own farts
and don't lie to me
it's okay
to feel shame
and do other things
in the name of it

it's really quite alright
to mitigate the fact
that no one is really selfless
we are all graded in this life on a handicap
(that was never disclosed)
and we cling to those like us

to pretend sharing
means reality
(apparently)
things
like morality
and power
are "self defining"
in aggregate

and this aggregate
pretends standards for
every
single
thing
that calls itself human
(maybe a bible or a law book)

even cannibals
and raging a******s
are considered

if, and only if
they are human
(of course)
every human
yes, every human
no matter what they've taken
gets a trial
because at least in America
we like the smell of our own farts
(kinda like hate smelling)
 actually          we love it

Reviews

[Farmgirl]

You have quite an interesting perspective .. to think that someone loves to hate ... As for myself , I love to hate hate ! I am totally against hatred ... Their are loving people that exist and are selfless ... People do exist not for themselves , but only for the help of others needing their existence as well .. Even when in themselves it is no longer wanted .... Of course, everyone has their flaws that's for certain ... And, shame is a natural emotion that comes along with regrets and wish I wouldn't haves ... We are human ... Yes, It is normal .... We all will have to stand trial and judgement for errors and even known mistakes here this is true but there is a possibility to be obsolved of them & not have to relive them I'm telling you the truth ... As for smelling farts and liking them .... hahahah it makes good laughter that is for sure ...





Very passionate & powerful piece that you have here ...


But, I think you lie to yourself about not enjoying other scents than just your own essences .... :P


Just sayin ..


open up don't be so closed minded ... And , let someone in once in a while ...


Not everyone is going to hurt you ...

Some , just want to enjoy you as someone who exists too & sees the world in a different view then they are used to embracing while stepping out of her comfort zone to view writings in attempt to view other writers and learn of their point of views while appreciating them as an artist too .....


Opinions are like A**holes everyone has them ! And, though you may not Always like or enjoy what one person has to say because it's not what you are used to viewing in your Review by them speaking to you from their point of view and what they see as they read your writing too ... Doesn't mean that they are wrong about what they thought about your writing ... Just because you failed to see the side & level of perspective they were on that time they visited you ....



-----You should think about that the next time you feel like you want to insult somebody because you thought they didn't understand your intent with the piece you posted to view publicly ----



L.

[Davidgeo]

You're quite talkative aren't you? Whether I agree with anything you just said is irrelevant... that you had that much to coherently say on this means more than anything. Thank you.

[Davidgeo]

FYI love to hate hate is still a form of hate.... loosen up baby doll, you might find you don't need to hate anything at all.

[Farmgirl]

=) I left a poem for you ... :P