Unstuck in Time

Unstuck in Time

A Poem by Davidgeo
"

.unabashedly so

"

do you think we're the same?

(we are not)

why baldness was bred out of you

so long ago... do you know?

how men survived baldness

   to invent the toupee

what a feat!!

and of your clown paint?

(and superstitions)

and don't forget,

that you are beautiful...

and i am vicious  

but whom tears deepest?

who is knife?

c**t...

these our questions? all f*****g moot;

all dressed in white.

i hear long knowledge can be crippling

in certain instance's

among certain thing's

revisited

(thing's unstuck in time)

in completely the same way

...

we are this

there is no difference

this is hurt

(unabashedly so)

human's are f*****g vicious

maybe sexist?

i smell like popcorn

 

© 2017 Davidgeo


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I like the sound of it. Humans ARE vicious, and everyone has a little bit of a Patrick Bateman inside of them,deeply (or not) cloaked underneath the layers and layers of eroded refinement we pretend to occupy ourselves with.

Love ''A perfect circle''. Score for a great music taste as well.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Dressed in white and painted black, dude this was... well... Ill save it for later on.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

What in the f**k does that even mean? clown
yes humans are vicious - we need to be reshaped, unravelled and stripped bare of all the past conditioning and remember what it means to be FREE X

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

You're perverted.
KWP

7 Years Ago

quite possibly you are correct
Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

how delightful
I like the sound of it. Humans ARE vicious, and everyone has a little bit of a Patrick Bateman inside of them,deeply (or not) cloaked underneath the layers and layers of eroded refinement we pretend to occupy ourselves with.

Love ''A perfect circle''. Score for a great music taste as well.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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