This piece is so raw. I love the honesty, the pure mocking of required social interaction. The things most people fear to say or even think about. " The fake ones. That's me.... " Well your not a fake at all, you are being 100% here. Nice job
Sheer Terror
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Thanks.
It's all the same you know. Being enraged or delighted, just another outlook.. read moreThanks.
It's all the same you know. Being enraged or delighted, just another outlook of the same things. I was better at being enraged the day I wrote this thing.
This piece is so raw. I love the honesty, the pure mocking of required social interaction. The things most people fear to say or even think about. " The fake ones. That's me.... " Well your not a fake at all, you are being 100% here. Nice job
Sheer Terror
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Thanks.
It's all the same you know. Being enraged or delighted, just another outlook.. read moreThanks.
It's all the same you know. Being enraged or delighted, just another outlook of the same things. I was better at being enraged the day I wrote this thing.
so, faces are made but there's nothing inside? I think perhaps there is something inside, but it's just an 'easier option' to say there's nothing there. In fact I think the jar is bursting at the seams with things inside, but confronting all of those things is in the too hard basket for today ... :D ... and yes, everybody makes faces when they masturbate ... very hard to keep a straight face then ... XXX
yup yup you got me ... ooh la la la la I am one at that X
7 Years Ago
Are you saying you wanna have a genital fight? As long as you're not allowed to flog me with your .. read moreAre you saying you wanna have a genital fight? As long as you're not allowed to flog me with your delightful breasts... I'm game.
Self destructive tendencies, knowingly partaking in unhealthy things, escapism vs actual desire.... .. read moreSelf destructive tendencies, knowingly partaking in unhealthy things, escapism vs actual desire.... stuff like that is what I mean by that phrase.
7 Years Ago
oh okay thats what I was thinking but wasn't sure. This a really great poem. I've been reading some .. read moreoh okay thats what I was thinking but wasn't sure. This a really great poem. I've been reading some of your work and it is all really good. I could read a whole book of poems that you wrote, I basically did today with your page haha.
You read me for the exact reason behind that passive aggressive tone... you feel something but you'.. read moreYou read me for the exact reason behind that passive aggressive tone... you feel something but you're too much of a p***y to actually say it. Sucks to be you kid.
7 Years Ago
FYI... passive aggressive dispositions make for s****y leaders in the military. Fix your attitude o.. read moreFYI... passive aggressive dispositions make for s****y leaders in the military. Fix your attitude or have fun being a career e-4.