I Smell Like You, but not really

I Smell Like You, but not really

A Poem by Davidgeo
"

.

"

i make faces.

the fake ones.

thats me...

basically.

i 'wish' i was you.

darling,

my skin is so soft

'n malleable,

your touch is golden.

to me...

you are scarce.

come inside

so i can make faces

and watch the normies say...

what's the difference?

(tits are tits)

but i can tell...

the real ones.

you see,

basically...

i am nobody,

it's how i see - f*****g everybody

 and make faces

for everybody

i wish you'd join me

make an inside

(i'm so empty)

i never learned

how to want

(properly)

i'm gonna go masturbate

 enraged

      i make faces

        i am rage

          , her displacement

with a damn fine memory


 i make faces

i have no insides

© 2017 Davidgeo


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

This piece is so raw. I love the honesty, the pure mocking of required social interaction. The things most people fear to say or even think about. " The fake ones. That's me.... " Well your not a fake at all, you are being 100% here. Nice job

Sheer Terror


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

Thanks.

It's all the same you know. Being enraged or delighted, just another outlook.. read more



Reviews

This is badass. Sexually self-aware and unapologetic about it.

We learn as we go. Enjoyed the read.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

Something very close to that, yeah.

Happy you liked it. I left out stuff, I was worr.. read more
This piece is so raw. I love the honesty, the pure mocking of required social interaction. The things most people fear to say or even think about. " The fake ones. That's me.... " Well your not a fake at all, you are being 100% here. Nice job

Sheer Terror


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

Thanks.

It's all the same you know. Being enraged or delighted, just another outlook.. read more
so, faces are made but there's nothing inside? I think perhaps there is something inside, but it's just an 'easier option' to say there's nothing there. In fact I think the jar is bursting at the seams with things inside, but confronting all of those things is in the too hard basket for today ... :D ... and yes, everybody makes faces when they masturbate ... very hard to keep a straight face then ... XXX

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

You're such a pervert.
KWP

7 Years Ago

yup yup you got me ... ooh la la la la I am one at that X
Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

Are you saying you wanna have a genital fight? As long as you're not allowed to flog me with your .. read more
When you say "I never learned how to want properly" what do you mean by that? If you don't mind me asking..

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

Self destructive tendencies, knowingly partaking in unhealthy things, escapism vs actual desire.... .. read more
Maya Lin

7 Years Ago

oh okay thats what I was thinking but wasn't sure. This a really great poem. I've been reading some .. read more
Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

Aww, that's sweet of you to say. Thanks.
the choke and slams, wag and pull, man I dont know why I read this, but I did, you and your little sick poems. But hey, someones gotta do em.

Posted 7 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

You read me for the exact reason behind that passive aggressive tone... you feel something but you'.. read more
Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

FYI... passive aggressive dispositions make for s****y leaders in the military. Fix your attitude o.. read more
Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse

7 Years Ago

Roger that! Im not staying there forever

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

317 Views
5 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 2 Libraries
Added on January 26, 2017
Last Updated on January 26, 2017

Author

Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



About
more..

Writing