Lover Enemies

today,

my enemy happens to fly

something i happen to be a passenger in.

as my family travels with me,

as do my enemies, my friends and strangers perfect.

all of us on the same damn flying plane.

so it then becomes necessity,

to love what you hate,

in the true spirit of hope.

sore losers tend to be inherently intolerant,

everyday.

Reviews

[Alessander]

The quote reminds me of that scene from Austin Powers when his dad proclaims, "I can't tolerate two things. Ppl who are intolerant of other cultures, and the Dutch!"

I like the idea of everyone traveling inside a person. That's one helluva roadtrip!

[Davidgeo]

All modern populations are inherently schizophrenic in my opinion. I like turtles, cats and marijuana.

[Davidgeo]

Nice profile avatar by the way... Patrick Bateman should run for the American presidency, with Eddie Murphy as VP

[aLittlePain]

I like this D, we're all a little bit of everything....some days I want to gouge my eyes out while petting my cat. I can also be a sore loser. Good poem. R xo

[Davidgeo]

I just had a strange feeling of deja vu... I was going to respond with something witty and coarse but what actually came out was just plain disturbing. I think I'm losing my mind.

[aLittlePain]

aww never mind D I lose my mind most days, it's like my cat, he eats makes a mess and then pisses off but eventually finds his way back.

[Farmgirl]

Oooo.. I quite enjoyed this !

[Davidgeo]

Thanks... My intent was for everyone to enjoy it. Even the one's who hate-read me.

[Farmgirl]

Well ... I understand.. But no worries.. This chick is no hate reader or writer critic lol
I just enjoy reading and writing!

All kinds of writing...

[Davidgeo]

My oh my, aren't you adorable. No worries, I promise. I like to spar is all, it helps me see things. You really don't understand, but, keep coming back... maybe you'll find something next time.

[Farmgirl]

I was saying I understand where you are coming from lol


Interesting response...

I always find things in writings that I read... maybe I just don't percieve the way you do about you writings lol

Afterall .. I'm on the outside looking in...


Ofcourse the perspective will he different.... only you truly kn ow how you feel and what your intents are within your pieces lol


I'm just admiring the passion of the writing in the time and heart you put into it lol


And if you like sparring

You found a fighter in me lol

Puts your gloves on


Hehhehe!

[Davidgeo]

I'm just f*****g with you. None of this matters... welcome to the park.

[Davidgeo]

I am God... by the way

[Farmgirl]

Ha ! Your so funny I just peed onmyself! God doesn't speak in such a manner not even close to an impersonation of my Lord.. and yes I caught that you were enticing me.. I don't mind.. Everyone had their personalities on here lol

[Davidgeo]

You presume to know 'how' God speaks? Hubris is a sin. And how dare you presume to call him "your" lord as if he works specifically for you, the way you carry on betrays a fundamental lack of religious understanding. Also... "everyone had their personalities on here lol"? What? This is a writing site is it not? Maybe you should try harder at writing then because you communicate like dog s**t via writing.

[Farmgirl]

I call him my Lord because I am taught to keep my Faith to myself . And that is what I do unless he sees me fit to witness to win a soul ... There is no sin in obeying God's One True Word ! I have much understanding of other faiths but much like many do mine I choose not to acknowledege them or allow them to influence my mind .. Nothing is creeping into this heart & soul that is NOT OF GOD sorry to disappoint you if you thought that was possible... I do not speak in Truth to offend anyone either ... Just like you believe what you believe strongly & passionately so do I with my beliefs .. AND NEITHER OF US WILL EVER COMPROMISE .... Only God can make changes in ones heart or closed mind ... Have a nice day ... And good luck in your spiritual journey to finding truth ... It's out there !

[Davidgeo]

"There is no sin in obeying God's One True Word!" You're so completely stuck in your world that I bet you are incapable of seeing the self contained madness in that statement. You live in an echo chamber that vilifies any dissenting opinion no matter how rational, proven and fact based it is. I truly pity you as a human being... you are not intellectually free in any sense of that word. You are a slave to ideology and fantasy.

[Farmgirl]

God Bless You



















































Ill pray for your heart and the ones who hurt you so much that you felt the need to lash at me I know what I believe just as you think you know
And neither one of us will be swayed unless we let our guards down and I am not willing to do that with you because as I said I am no compromiser


And you know what I'm not going to argue or debate God's existence with you or the Truth about Jesus and WHO HE WAS IS AND IS TO COME AND WILL ALWAYS BE ... And I know you already know of that truth ! I am not here to Bible thump to you .. Or to disprove you ... And, I have no intent to attack you as you have me for what I believe and have come to know personally to be true in my own spiritual faith walk and journey ...

And, I do not see my statement as self contained madness I see what I said as harsh truth that you are afraid to accept Why I do not know

But it is not my place to question or judge you and I am not going to

I am a servant to truth


Have a good day You :P

[Davidgeo]

Don't patronize me f**k face. It only goes downhill from there.

[Farmgirl]

Lol not patronizing you at all only merely speaking honestly as I am taught to do

Why are you so angry ?

[Davidgeo]

Ha... fair enough. My apologies.

[Farmgirl]

It's okay ... =)