Surface Tension

water is soft.

so it's rational

to jump in it

and why wouldn't you

make the cleverest attempt

to take advantage of that

from great heights

you may also find

what is moral

what is ethical

varies greatly...

from great heights

always remember,

that surface tension can kill you

and that the higher you get

the more that that matters

Reviews

[ManasaC]

Sometimes a thing as small as a needle could be the cause of destruction. One should never underestimate what something so harmless could do to others. I enjoyed it very much!

[Davidgeo]

Yeah, something like that. Thanks for your comment.

[aLittlePain]

This is powerful D, like a wisdom a truth. The things that matter most, often have great risk or one must struggle for it. This most certainly speaks to my recent personal challenges. I really enjoyed this. R xo

[Davidgeo]

I'm glad it spoke to you.

[aLittlePain]

it did more than you realise

[Davidgeo]

That genuinely makes me feel nice. Unless it told you to drown babies and rape the elderly... because, that's not cool man.

[aLittlePain]

No not cool at all.

[Davidgeo]

If you weren't a lesbian I would totally try and have sex with you.

[aLittlePain]

Hahaha, if you had a p***y I'd be fine with it I suppose

[Marina]

Wow! The life lessons are strong with this one. I love it.

[Jddcbjiuh]

I like this... One should never be afraid to 'jump' from that height. Fear can be a strong chain to loosen up, but that being so high symbolizes the importance of taking that leap, or 'that chance'. Nicely done.

[Davidgeo]

That's not what I was getting at, not at all. But that's not as important, I'm glad you enjoyed it.