Candle People

Candle People

A Poem by Davidgeo
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paraffin my dear,

it's a waxy word.

what's even more?

water cannot touch it.

like a distant memory,

rolling off horizon...


gone


my sweet.

all dressed in white,

left very incomplete.

(say sorry)

What we adored,

but could not take.

more memory, my dear?

for the wax museum?

(you c**t)

 

paraffin my dear...

water cannot touch it

we both cannot touch this any more

© 2017 Davidgeo


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I like this D, but have no f*****g clue. Well first I thought creepy...then i thought is this about wax play but that was just fleeting. Now I'm just thinking it's about preservation for something now gone which is quite obvious. Anyway I like it. R xo

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aLittlePain

7 Years Ago

I happen to like vaginas thank you
Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

Yeah. I like them too. Vaginas are awesome.
aLittlePain

7 Years Ago

Agreed!....



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I like this D, but have no f*****g clue. Well first I thought creepy...then i thought is this about wax play but that was just fleeting. Now I'm just thinking it's about preservation for something now gone which is quite obvious. Anyway I like it. R xo

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aLittlePain

7 Years Ago

I happen to like vaginas thank you
Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

Yeah. I like them too. Vaginas are awesome.
aLittlePain

7 Years Ago

Agreed!....

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Added on January 19, 2017
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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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