Taken, Mistaken, Occasionally Unintended

in pictures taken

with too much light exposure

your chin can blend into your neck

, it, can be like, a meta-f*****g-"fore"

for personalities

who confuse the f**k outta me

(and each other) and you

with overly conflicting exposures

of persons mistaken

for being taken

     for things unintended

ted bundy never knew,

what was real life...

that we live beyond pictures

and not everything is numb

that we really aren't alone

pictures are just taken

that nothing is kept

we are not just for us

nothing is kept

ya fuggin' psychopath

Reviews

[Papaya]

Had I not read below I would not have known that it was about psychopaths. Except for the picture of Ted Bundy I guess. I like your opening, the metaphor for personalities. To be neckless means that you can't turn your head to see, and if you only see what's in front of you, never see the whole picture. It's like saying 'look around you at what's going on in the world'. anyway, that's what i got out of this. that was my favourite part

[Davidgeo]

You spell favorite like a Canadian.

[Papaya]

You look French.

[Davidgeo]

I've told you this before... I related to old French aristocrat blood lines, dawg.

[Papaya]

I know, that's so cool

[Davidgeo]

I was joking. That whole sentence was even typed like a hill billy. I'm from total ghetto trash bloodlines. All the French and Spanish marquisates are d*********s anyway.

[Papaya]

The dawg did make wonder a little... It's all good, I grew up in the hood.

[Davidgeo]

You're not curious as to why a relatively young American knows to refer to the old school French/Spanish aristocracy as the "marquisates"?

[Papaya]

I just assumed it was because of your obsession with pirates and such, or your knack for knowing everything...

[Davidgeo]

Damn... you know me well. Wanna make out later?

[Papaya]

I thought you'd never ask...

[Davidgeo]

Pretty sure I've asked you that before. Maybe ten or hundred times. You always said your penis would get in the way.

[Papaya]

Busted . . .

[Jddcbjiuh]

Hah, Ted did have a misconception on life, he was just determined, in my opinion, as most psychopaths are, to watch the world burn, as Michael Kane has said, instead of realizing there's more to life than destruction and that there are better things to seek or survey.

[Davidgeo]

That's an incredible simple (and erroneous) way of profiling Bundy. He didn't just want to watch the world burn, he got sexual gratification from raping and brutally murdering young attractive women and he would later return to the corpses to put makeup on them, dress them up and perform necrophilia. He had no misconceptions, he knew what he was doing was wrong... the man was a borderline genius and even acted as his own lawyer during his trial. Ted Bundy probably knew more about humanity than you or I could ever hope, he just had values and desires that were so different they literally ended or ruined peoples lives in an irreversible way. Lumping Ted Bundy in with "most psychopaths" means you have no f*****g idea who Ted Bundy really was.... I have no respect for people who try and speak intelligently on something using movie quotes without knowing jack s**t about the subject... you just wanna sound cool = d********g.

[Jddcbjiuh]

Woah woah woah, ok if my opinion 'sucked' then there's no need to turn into an a*****e and call me a f*****g douchey bag ? I take everything I said back sweetheart. OOPS.

F*****g c**t.

[Davidgeo]

A d********g's a d********g... I call em like I see em. I imagine you use the same or similar reasoning when calling me a "f*****g c**t" in this moment. D********g.

[Jddcbjiuh]

Beats your reasoning as your only logic to feel better about your brainless self is calling me a d********g. You're so silly and probably 12 and if you're older you're really f*****g hilarious.

[Jddcbjiuh]

F**k everything you believe in and I hope you do yourself a favor and shove an ice pick in your eye then plunge it in your chest. Nice chatting with ya.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Pictures, the frozen piece of time, the good the bad and ugly always carry their names in the stills of movement, but such rage when unappropriated people missuse its beauty

[Davidgeo]

Good review.

[Frankie Bear Paws.]

I like this.
i've always thought "Bundy" would make a great graffiti name. this reafirmed that.

[Davidgeo]

Thanks Patrick.

[aLittlePain]

Like these lines...
'that we live beyond pictures
and not everything is numb
that we really aren't alone'

what happened to the dog pic? It was sort of cute

[Davidgeo]

The adorable doggie pic was not apt for the actual meaning of this poem.

This thing is f*****g dark man... like, one of the most dark things I think I've ever written.

[Davidgeo]

Oh yeah... did we say dog pic? That was a picture of a cat. A breed of hairless freak cats who look like puppies with huge ears their entire life but still cats none the less.

[aLittlePain]

Omg...I really thought it was a dog

[Davidgeo]

It was a basket of 3 baby Cornish Rex kittens. It's sad because they are such a sweet breed of kittens but look so terrifying.... cats need hair man.

[Davidgeo]

For real though, this poem was about psychopathic murder.

[aLittlePain]

The whole Ted bundy thing kinda leaned toward that. You know I'm the dumb kid in class sometimes I told you that

[Davidgeo]

Dumb kids do not compose and comment on poetry. I don't pity your intellect.

[aLittlePain]

I haven't been called a kid in ages

[aLittlePain]

Makes me feel young

[Davidgeo]

I also called you smart ya old bag.

[aLittlePain]

Lol...thank you D, 40 is the new 30 thank you very much

[Davidgeo]

We'll carry this delightfulness over to the next silly poem one of us writes.