Dr Unabashed

find me the soul searcher, Dr. Unabashed

mr devastating lightning

the exposer of the darkest corners

we have in common...

this sharp thinker, from the past

a dead speaker

alive, Dr Nietszche,

have you truly died?

with no successor?

god may live

f**k the world

pray to god

Author's Note

Reviews

[Ana B.]

Nietzsche has a quote that i like: "All that is rare for the rare''.
I like the mind's quest in this one. Lovely done, as ever :)

[TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSh..]

Dr. Unabashed is more than an entertaining piece. There is an underlined meaning here besides the aggressive attack on mankind.
Mankind, you hint about our future and look to the past. Your message is strong and your delivery like best layed plans.

Sheer Terror

[Davidgeo]

Is it really? I thought it was just a really clever fart joke.

[TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSheerTerror]

Mr. Finger when read your poetry especially this piece. It reminds me of a poet named Robert Burns. When I read this poem earlier I felt you were attacking man kind for the chaos we can't control. Robert Burns wrote a Poem about a mouse. It is symbolism such as you use. There is this great line in the Poem.

[TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSheerTerror]

He wrote a poem in the late 1780's

[TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSheerTerror]

The best laid schemes o' Mice an' Men,
Gang aft agley,
I think you have the same style you write about what little control we actually have. That's what I get your writings are very entertaining and amusing thank you.
Sheer Terror

[Davidgeo]

You're a clever one

[Luna]

That was really powerful I liked the part where you have written" f**k the world, pray to god" .That is an amazing line for me. And the poem is a unique one too. You've been working hard Mr.Finger and hard work deserves praise. Keep up the good work. Nice read :)

[Davidgeo]

I have nothing to say on your review... I just had to let you know how much I enjoy your profile picture.

[Luna]

Thank you very much :) Happy new year BTW :)

[Cerebriation]

What a dark, intense piece. I love the chaotic structure and clever wording. I feel like I am listening to someone's conversation with the dead, or with himself, then quickly devolving into solemn, bitter words.