When Everything Sparkles

When Everything Sparkles

A Poem by Davidgeo
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every book is a children's book if they can read

and I once crashed into an intellectual

dame

she talked to me and caused simple ideas to sparkle

like every childhood memory I could ever remember

© 2017 Davidgeo


Author's Note

Davidgeo
a very natural accident

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This feels special.
I need to think on it, may come back to it.
It's as if you realize that a child's mind is like a diamond in the rough. Polished over time to shine with brilliant ideas.
Sadly, not all children meet the right people in life that show them how to shine. I like this poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Like this D, certainly one we can all relate to. Just takes a spark! Yeah this is dope! R xo

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Loved the brief description that can resonate with anyone... it burns your point into the emotions of the reader. Also... Loved the use of the word dame.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

Thanks. Dame is one of my favorite words.
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This feels special.
I need to think on it, may come back to it.
It's as if you realize that a child's mind is like a diamond in the rough. Polished over time to shine with brilliant ideas.
Sadly, not all children meet the right people in life that show them how to shine. I like this poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Woah Mr.finger where did this come out of a sudden. Short but described in a beautiful way. As I read this I felt This man is serious those ideas might have really affected you. Got to hand to you this is a very cool piece.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

Thanks Luna. If you read me enough you will see many things like this from time to time.
This is lovely Mr. Finger. Simple yet profound. I am yet to "crash" into an intellectual man who can spark my imagination/ideas :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

Thanks doll face.
Oh man. That is really nice! I think this is worthy of sharing! I never thought you had this kind of stuff in you. The pirate isn't just a bandit after all, he too is a scholar.
"Every book is a children's book if they can read."
Awesome!

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Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

Thanks mang. I have many things in me. Arrr...

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Added on December 26, 2016
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Johnsburg, IL



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