Have From Me What I Took From You

Have From Me What I Took From You

A Poem by Davidgeo

give me a righteous situation.


and come near me, hear my breath.


do disrespect me


please...ms diligence?


do your worst,


and help me now -


as i myself can not.


so let us kiss....


this moment in love with us,


love ourselves...


in front of the rest of us,


in common with what's around.


you know.... the general's of things


the obvious of the general things;


that stock image in love,


those family picture inserts,


this knife inverse...


what's more picture perfect,


than no way out?


so we might as well...


test our blood.


it holds a secret,

   (in silence)

I've heard.


so hush now, let us bleed it...


'tis rich

'tis delicious


my investment's in pain,

our dividends...

even the vain one's


I am confident,

we are more delicious

than simply vicious


hence the relative permanence....


(it's why I play...

    ; )


for blood,

© 2016 Davidgeo


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Davidgeo

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"[T]his moment in love with us," seductive words here. Great write!

Posted 8 Years Ago


'Tis 'tis! one of my favorite phrases.
What possessed you to write this?

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

What possessed me to write this? Who cares? I'm a writer so I write things. The root of it wouldn'.. read more
XO Vee

8 Years Ago

I like the way you explain that, poetry is for those who don't want to sit here and tell their life .. read more
"I am confident, we are more delicious than simply vicious" loved this one! Your whole poem is a beautiful flow of images, especially the part with the inverse knife. Wow!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

The inverse knife is a painful thing. Glad you liked it anyway.

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