My Delilah

oh delilah

my delightful

watch me splatter upon the rocks

with the coming tide

my delilah

my delightful

for you

only anything will do

ask of me everything

i have

dear baby doll

how shall this end?

my delilah

so delightful

for you

i will be

abstract fodder for the rocks

we rough and we jagged

delightful

my destructive

oh delilah

how we do consume

to our bitter ends

in concert

how delightful

my delilah

making sacred wonderful

Reviews

[Corset]

"too" our bitter ends, and also on my page-

[Davidgeo]

Thanks. For the one in the poem. People who b***h about minor typos in comments and reviews are idiotic pretentious. Why didn't you just point out "too" to begin with? You're kind of a d********g.

[Corset]

lol.......................

[Corset]

like Samson and Delilah, she who weakens him...by cutting off his hair and with her womanly wiles deceives him, betrays him, bitters him...other than the typos this isn't half bad.

[Davidgeo]

It'd be more helpful to point typos out in a more specific way. What typos are you talking about?