The Try Hard's; The Rasputin's

the try hard's, the stupid's

acting out infernally like soft demagogues

without real claws, nor even very strong paws.

pretended mandates

verified by the masses

a very annoying quality to their embeddedness

a sticky, almost natural presence

 mass pretendedness

 background perfectly unproven, still remaining... f*****g entities

 performing very strong mental gymnastics

sans leotards, i simply see naked airborne confusions

more STD

 than naked quality

more likely divine madness

embedded internal and disastrous

  repetitive; unrepentant

they continue to write books about this s**t

didn't you know?

all manner of bullshit's passed through the ages

the blackbeard's

the rasputin's,

eternally,

among other witches

it's all very readable stuff

all of it

very readable.

Author's Note

Reviews

[KWP]

well yes there will always be the monkey's - I must confess I too am a monkey at times ... but what to do? As the universe expands so does the muddlement, as the population gets out of control, the more monkies run riot. Aren't we all trying to make sense of the whys & hows?

[Davidgeo]

Who are these monkey's you speak of? Do they have tails? If they have lost there tails they are no longer called monkey's but rather apes or chimps. I science good, I science hard. Like Joe Mantegna.

[KWP]

they are monkeys man ... everywhere, scurrying here and there and bringing with them news of nothing new at all ... me science ? well ... you science good yes ... me just a little ..

[Davidgeo]

I just want to find the right kangaroo to saddle up and ride to the fair dressed in fine linen and dandy hats.

[KWP]

my mate in Africa rides ostriches ... you can come as you are ... dandy hats or not ...

[KWP]

my mate in Africa rides ostriches ... you can come as you are ... dandy hats or not ...

[Davidgeo]

My father always said never to trust a person that rides an ostrich... with or without the dandy hat.

[KWP]

that's interesting ... but seeings as this mate is my all time best friend from all time (did I mention all time) I am going to buy her a dandy hat, get on a plane and perhaps ride one with her :) (two untrustworthy monkies) ..

[Jenny Leigh]

Another good one...though I sense a lot of anger in this one than the others before.

[Davidgeo]

I am a vessel of sound and fury. Usually signifying nothing. I rip off Billy Shakes whenever I can. You should read more of me, that will make more sense.

[aLittlePain]

The muppets are glorified in recycled stories inflated that little bit extra every time. I can't disagree with anything you've said here. Readable indeed, singable as well apparently. Very entertaining captain Flint! R xo

[Davidgeo]

Thanks. I do wish I could sing. I can meow really good... and bark. I bark well also.

[aLittlePain]

im impressed captain

[Davidgeo]

you would be

[aLittlePain]

I have rapidly falling standards

[Davidgeo]

Me too. It all falls apart, entropy is a lot like a period.

[aLittlePain]

Lol...that's probably one of the best descriptions of a period I've ever heard.