I liked how you ended it was a question. "Will you now, com eiwth me?" Sort of leaves an open ending which leaves the reader to think about it with himself.
Our purpose, as a race, and as individuals, is to keep going, no matter what.
Had a nice read . . . :)
I liked how you ended it was a question. "Will you now, com eiwth me?" Sort of leaves an open ending which leaves the reader to think about it with himself.
Our purpose, as a race, and as individuals, is to keep going, no matter what.
Had a nice read . . . :)
I heard a saying today - as humans our purpose is to keep the universe expanding .... that's what your poem reminded me of.
I actually believe as humans, our soul purpose is to flourish in whatever way we choose.
I like that you started at the foundations and then felt the need to break away at the end ...the middle bit went a bit skewiff for me though ... :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thanks for reviewing, it helps me flourish as a human. Do Australians really think most Americans b.. read moreThanks for reviewing, it helps me flourish as a human. Do Australians really think most Americans believe that most Australians ride Kangaroo's to school as children?
8 Years Ago
well judging by the tow running for president .... what do you think we believe?
no.. read morewell judging by the tow running for president .... what do you think we believe?
not being rude, but I know that in my generation Americans were brought up to believe that it is the greatest nation on earth, I think this caused many to become insular and cocky and yes, dumb to the rest of the world ...
![[send message]](https://www.writerscafe.org/images/mail.png){kind=small}
![[befriend]](https://www.writerscafe.org/images/friend.png){kind=small}
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Read Request
My Library
Flag Writing
