Emerge With Great Effort

broken from the ashes

i am diamonds

cut me down deep

into my violence

i rise from ashes

my mistakes

my precious

lost frustrations

defeats

broken form into ashes

time goes on...

unbroken

compressed

i am resilience

from the deep i will come back

to success with great effort

this will is my precious

cutting through my ordinary

i will exceed on her back

on our ashes

our, broken memories

still...

i can make a difference

heartbroken

with a diamond will

and all that's precious

and what emerges

with great effort...

much more than just survival

with great effort

　we emerge

more than ever

lasting

a diamond ring

that i cannot give

without great effort

Reviews

[aLittlePain]

This is tight some smooth lines. I dig the analogy. Perfection is an illusion, flaws make us real, give us character substance. I like this loads. R xo

[Davidgeo]

"i like this loads".... that made me chuckle.

[Jenny Leigh]

No two diamond are exactly alike, just like people.

[guy drori]

Wonderful piece of work. People tend to think that being perfect is being flawles, but if there were flawless people they would be boring (Luckily no one is flawless/perfect.) Our flaws are what make us who we are.

[Davidgeo]

I like to pretend I'm flawless sometimes. Sets me up for some very interesting failures.