Time vs the Age's

Time vs the Age's

A Poem by Davidgeo
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I'd write more

If I had more reason

For not having a reason


I'd be a part from something

That smells alot like nothing

Deep in a discourse


Socially unexpected like some caterpillar

Once a butterfly

Who lost his wings


Burned

To close to a great fire

Unearned


I'd buy a musket if it was old 1797

With pure reason

To defend things clean

Per my age


But that seems a reason

That doesn't line up anymore

With these times

Of my rage

© 2016 Davidgeo


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and yes ... but for what is the reason, and do we actually need one? someone at some point thought we ought to classify not only their own reasonings, but reason for everyone else too... and look at what we got a scrap heap of observations, made into thought, made into reality made into now ...

it's all the same, a little bit more tangled each day perhaps, that's what the ethnosphere will do whn it's not properly coultivated, propigated or maintained ...

we still can't seem to figure out the age old lessons though can we?

good piece - food for thought - ..

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

Only a fool would dare to classify the laughing arts, social reasons are and always will be arbitrar.. read more
KWP

8 Years Ago

Well I think it can ... but you''d have to be a fool to believe it ... and I play a fool quite well .. read more



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and yes ... but for what is the reason, and do we actually need one? someone at some point thought we ought to classify not only their own reasonings, but reason for everyone else too... and look at what we got a scrap heap of observations, made into thought, made into reality made into now ...

it's all the same, a little bit more tangled each day perhaps, that's what the ethnosphere will do whn it's not properly coultivated, propigated or maintained ...

we still can't seem to figure out the age old lessons though can we?

good piece - food for thought - ..

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

Only a fool would dare to classify the laughing arts, social reasons are and always will be arbitrar.. read more
KWP

8 Years Ago

Well I think it can ... but you''d have to be a fool to believe it ... and I play a fool quite well .. read more
This piece eludes me, though I like the second stanza.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

Things are the same we just use different tools. I guess that's the essence of this. Most of the t.. read more

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