The Pyramid's are Crumbling

Everything becomes a s****y version of itself eventually. Even the pyramids look like s**t these days.

There are no disinterested participants. Forever or as long as we can 

Said we advocates of ourselves,

whose rivals we might want to destroy.

We like neat endings, fulfilled definitions,

full on confirmed predispositions,

a real treat

valid and proud... our old mother's advice. 

Nothing can say anything

so you must be something.

Always,

never lost or destroyed,

on the brink of forgetfulness....

Nothing's destroyed.

Still silence with much mass.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

There you go again, putting my thoughts on paper when I didn't even know that I was thinking them til you wrote them down and sent a read request to me. How do you do that? Do you have ESP? Is it magic? No, never mind, don't tell me. I love the mystery of it. Some people might get paranoid, that their brain was "bugged", but not me, I think it's pretty cool.

[Davidgeo]

I really only liked the first line of this. One of the reason's why it didn't get a fancy picture... it's not a fancy poem.

I thought read requests were just polite versions of trolling... I love to force my words onto people in that vain. I'm shocked I don't get more negative reviews, most of the people on my friend list are there because they have opposite or close to opposite views in respect to mine. Bunch of pansies is how I am starting to see it... stuck in their own world. I am too of course, but I try and venture out as often as possible and justify myself as often as possible... sometimes I even abandon past understandings for better ones because of that. It's the kind of self improvement Tyler Durden wouldn't call masturbation.

[Barbara Walker]

Ah, but with read requests we always have the option, to read or not to read and one step further, to review or not to review. Etc. Etc.

[Davidgeo]

Most people read them, too much view count disparity between when I do and do not send them. I am surprised I don't get more negative reviews on those views, or at least alternate view points. I really don't think people, on average, like to go further than "i don't agree, because... reasons". Too much of that makes for a stupid population in my opinion. Stupid people with morals can be coerced too easily... slavery was justified on religious moral grounds, American Indian slaughter was justified on moral grounds, segregation, institutional racism, the crusades, modern religious terrorism, etc., etc, that list goes on a long way. I see that in a lot of the writing on this site... people just don't have a lot of logic behind their passion. Passion without logic is, well, remember that list a I made a couple sentences ago?

[Barbara Walker]

Just speaking off the top of my head I think most, if not all of the horror humankind has wrought on each other in the past and continues now is and was done in the name of someone's god.(Since you are always saying my thoughts before I do, wanted to put in my 2 cents. lol) she said, passionately.

[Davidgeo]

True, I what you say is true.

[Davidgeo]

I meant to say, I *think* what you say is true. Sorry, my shoes hurt today.

[Marina]

The first sentence made me laugh :D
I really enjoyed this, I love the bitter sarcasm it gives off

[Davidgeo]

Bitter sarcasm is my specialty.

[Kathrin S]

Interesting! I liked reading this poem, and I've never really thought about this before.

[Davidgeo]

That's a good thing, I hope.

[Kathrin S]

Yes it is :)