Recreational Outrage

Recreational Outrage

A Poem by Davidgeo
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here we are

enduring by default

so easy to stay alive

it just kinda happens

but...

do you have to make it uneasy?

it should be a privilege

mankind's vacation

more luxurious by generation

not a different reason

for constricting correctness

arbitrary a*****e face

"somethings gotta be hard!"

for the very common

pretending enlightened

mongoloid idiots

backlash forms retarded

populations of proffesional victims

and all they've ever known

i bet

in a diary full of names

of people they hate

and why they hate

you

with recreational outrage

.... i think they're just bored

 

© 2016 Davidgeo


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and i Think you are right ... they are just bored ... people who dwell on people are rather boring ... ah man there's so much more (can you feel it?) there's just so much more (can you taste it?) we humans, to say alive need to stay within the smallest of temperature ranges, if our body heat goes to high we die, if it goes to low, we die, and yet there is a whole eternity of time out there existing in temperatures we, as humans, cannot even fathom because ... we just cannot experience it ... and yet still, we have our diaries of grievances, some even have gratitude diaries, but what's the trick here? And how does one escape the mundane if they do not know any other reality ... ahh ... it's only the people who were born in daylight that are truly awake ...

nice piece and right on point ... I think though, as you said to me previously, you could perhaps, loose a few words to emphasise what is not already highlighted X

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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