It's Alright Though

what I do to myself is not right

i know this

in spite of things

what it seems

like i'm doing just right

over the fact that it's me

doing it

to myself

still, this doesn't feel right

eh, still feels like it likes me

not quite,

though

 

and it burns

everything

perfectly

correctly

it feels nice

i think?

as we like it

as you like it?

rarely....

as i need it

it's not herpes

it's much worse

the lies...

we tell ourselves

i am not alone

friend-o

we are all alone

Reviews

[lua]

a beautifully stagnated structure, assimilates the tentative, ambiguous relationship one develops with themself

[Davidgeo]

Thanks. I wasn't sure about this one. Whenver I'm in doubt I tend to lean toward sparseness and word economy; use the line breaks to define tone, etc..