I Love You All

I Love You All

A Poem by Davidgeo
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i am a man of rational hatred

reasoned anger; my world is on fire

and this is my hell

in my hell i've made paradise

so it's true

  - anger, hate -

  it'll drive you blind enraged

but if you are truly this, not just for kicks

the real meat backyard beefout, pro formed hatred

sculpted by anger, loss, and betrayal

welcome home

my dear

take a seat, quietly

you will find heaven inside this hell

call it a kind of enlightenment

breaking the sin of self deception

over the knee of morality

(take a deep breath lad)

i do know this

because i am the devil

and i hate them all

i hate you all

if you too are the devil

find this purpose

it's your heaven

found anywhere

in anything

      a light of pure reason

even in hell

there's a whole bunch of happiness

if you would but take it

© 2016 Davidgeo


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A sinister yet enticing voice with some insane lines. "Welcome home....my dear" gave me chills! When you read something and you literally hear the voice speaking them...damn.

Lines 7-10 though consistent and individually tight they felt a little clunky to me...kinda disrupted the flow.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

Thanks holmes... i'll take a look see at those lines. Maybe. I'm pretty lazy.



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A sinister yet enticing voice with some insane lines. "Welcome home....my dear" gave me chills! When you read something and you literally hear the voice speaking them...damn.

Lines 7-10 though consistent and individually tight they felt a little clunky to me...kinda disrupted the flow.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

Thanks holmes... i'll take a look see at those lines. Maybe. I'm pretty lazy.

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Johnsburg, IL



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