Dr Nostalgia; We Hardly Knew Ye

.Suddenly, dying instantly.... like a baby without memory; it might be mercy, it may be tragedy, it might be nothing.

Idiot f**k stain,

How did you even become a baby?

Helpless.... Dr Albatross.

You a*****e,

You can't use nautical braking systems for land vehicles...

You f*****g twat!

You've caused a mess

Now you can't breath

This hulk is listing...

And without lifeboats

Or other fine ideas,

 I fear the worst...

Can you remember how it got so crazy?

Some babies drown in the placenta.

A beginning that can't remember anything...

That has to mean something.

But it doesn't.

 It's just nostalgia

And we will die...

What's the difference?

   (When we don't even know the cause)

Outside of pretending...

Anyways....

   this s**t is whack yo

Author's Note

Reviews

[Papaya]

Good use of colourful language to paint disturbing images and thoughts.

[Davidgeo]

indeed....

[Davidgeo]

Would you like to take a stab at what this means? I'm shocked anyone at all left a review on this thing. But it does not mean you're off the hook... that pile of words I call a poem is not just colorful language meant to paint a disturbing picture. What are your thoughts beyond that? Curious minds would like to know.

[Papaya]

Abortion and / or miscarriage?

[Davidgeo]

Game of poker.... I know... I did go out of my way to make it sound like the other. Can it be both?

[Papaya]

Yes, there's induced abortion and natural abortion. That's what miscarriage is. The body aborting an egg that is not viable. Bad eggs are aborted naturally.

[Davidgeo]

You're such a pleasant gal...

[Papaya]

So what is the poem about?

[Davidgeo]

I wasn't joking... a fucked up game of poker and an abortion.

[Davidgeo]

(unrelated instances of course)

[Papaya]

Good use of colourful language to paint disturbing images and thoughts.

[Davidgeo]

Thanks baby doll... it's nice to know you're good at what you do.