This one feels much more obscure so I can't say I understand it with my linear mind. But I like phrases like "understating overwhelming dangers very loudly, far away then closer to us so sold to us" and "nearer then slower now it's what seems to be coming now upon us"- in these lines I feel the quality of impending danger that we could have been warned about, were it not for the very loud declaration that there is no danger. Beyond fear, this feels like a prophet's voice showing the ending, though men will not know it until it is upon them. Maybe I got this all wrong, but what I feel is the inevitable spoken, our surprise ending not anticipated. (Didn't watch the video though . . .) interesting and thought-provoking read.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
You should watch the video... it's not what you think it is.
8 Years Ago
Wonderful & adorable video- thanks for posting it. So, I guess I did get the meaning of your poem al.. read moreWonderful & adorable video- thanks for posting it. So, I guess I did get the meaning of your poem all wrong . . .
This one feels much more obscure so I can't say I understand it with my linear mind. But I like phrases like "understating overwhelming dangers very loudly, far away then closer to us so sold to us" and "nearer then slower now it's what seems to be coming now upon us"- in these lines I feel the quality of impending danger that we could have been warned about, were it not for the very loud declaration that there is no danger. Beyond fear, this feels like a prophet's voice showing the ending, though men will not know it until it is upon them. Maybe I got this all wrong, but what I feel is the inevitable spoken, our surprise ending not anticipated. (Didn't watch the video though . . .) interesting and thought-provoking read.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
You should watch the video... it's not what you think it is.
8 Years Ago
Wonderful & adorable video- thanks for posting it. So, I guess I did get the meaning of your poem al.. read moreWonderful & adorable video- thanks for posting it. So, I guess I did get the meaning of your poem all wrong . . .