Guilty Pressure

Never ruin the pleasure with the pressure

Everything requires a rational response

Never let fatigue cloud your judgements

　

Always remain true to what you planned for

Nothing will ever be perfectly planned for

Always be light on your feet with your reactions

　

None the less we all of us get lost

As none of us not one are heaven sent

None of this for us was planned for us

　

Everything is now window dressing

What we sell as perpetual

Everything remains for sale

Every, single

Thing

We are subjective

Just reactions to the natural world

Because of it;

Just because she could

So here we are... all of us

Under one earth pressure

Together.... one way or another

(here we are)

Author's Note

the following song is the oppo of my message here... none the less - this is good music and good music requires no agreement. Just because it is... fucking awesome.

Reviews

[GalaxyGhost]

Everything about your poem is quite agreeable. I especially agree with the first line that sometimes there is so much pressure that we don't put our best effort into things. I also like how this poem has a lot of messages to society and in a way it is a call for a change in how we approach things. So like instead of rushing through things and missing out on life we should probably appreciate the journey and the cool stuff that comes with life that sometimes rushing and racing would be missed.

[Davidgeo]

Your review had more words than the poem. I see it as a good sign. Thank yous.

[GalaxyGhost]

You're welcome!

[iamshadowine]

a fantastic piece! i loved it!
keep writing :D

[Davidgeo]

You just copy and paste the same review over and over again... You change it up here and there but ultimately, I doubt you have a clue what was written. I kinda think you don't read anything, you just leave generic reviews to get attention. I regret asking you to read me... stop reviewing me - you are full of s**t.