Doll Face

. of what the world means to me. .of what you could have no idea.

there was a time when a clever girl

meant more to me than a simple world

i left reason to bare with my weapons out back

my teeth became dull and my belt became wide

this was a time a clever girl

meant the world to me

the time I'd complicate

every piece of me

...

i miss being in love

as we should be

every one of us

Reviews

[Heather]

Such a lovely piece, the ironic beauty of how we are willing to give up who we are for the sake of someone else. Who knows, maybe the reality is they just reveal parts of us we didn't know existed. I enjoyed reading this :)

[Davidgeo]

I, actually, really enjoyed reading your review. Optimists are rare these days... stay alive as long as you can.

[Heather]

I'm glad! Few people see this side of me, the majority of the time I'm extremely pessimistic. But you're poem brought out a different side of me.

[Davidgeo]

What side is that? Elaboration comes from the few.

[Davidgeo]

so fuggin few...

[Heather]

A side where I don't automatically assume the worst of a situation, when I consider the possibility that something else could happen.

[Heather]

I wasn't being ignorant, I was just busy

[Davidgeo]

ugh. I can smell you. Try Harder Heather.

[Heather]

Urm, what?

[Davidgeo]

As you like it.

[Davidgeo]

I'm busting balls tonight. happy new year

[Heather]

I haven't the foggiest as to what you are even on about

[Davidgeo]

Your understanding of me is irrelevant to me.

[Heather]

I never claimed it to be relevant, was merely voicing what I thought. If my understanding of you was completely irrelevant then you wouldn't have put those things in the first place, but okay.

[Davidgeo]

Word, dawg.

[CrystleDawn]

A complement taken and twisted. If people can comment, everyone's opinion should ring with relevance to you. It is constructive. Yet again hats off to the politically correct at heart, or i could say (the little too ready to hop on the Take Offence Train). Oh wow, what has this world come to? And just strait weird id say. To you, Word Dawg... Have a nice day! I am with you heather, go on and say what you feel any day. You cant please them all, as my father would say.

[Davidgeo]

Mind your own business buddy. Heather does not need some "random" (I know who you are) knight in shining armor. I don't think this obscure and random comment thread required a third party, I think the two original parties had found a natural conclusion to the discussion. I don't know Anthony, do you really think you needed to interject or are you just trolling again?