Soundscape

it's building up

like the sound of a train coming to halt

the soundscape of that moment

likened to the emotional

an approaching volume

piercing the air

the sound of furious energy

dressed in a halting crescendo

dissipating some heavy steel's dense inertia

into rest mass, motion less

quietness

however, the tension remains thick

you can still cut that with a knife

it remains, building

Reviews

[softlyfall]

This is full of conflict and contradictions, which I assume was intentional. When I disrearded the contradictions in the literal sense, I could exprience this poem as a whole, as a sort of spectrogram or sound graph, a visual emotion.

[Davidgeo]

that was the idea for the most part.... thanks for reading.