Looks Like Dog Pubes

it's not your spine holding you back

your mustache looks like dog pubes

and there's not much you can do about that

and don't give me any bullshit about power animals

or Kung Fu outfits; you're not a damn Kung Fu master

not even anything at all resembling that

you can't even grow a mustache

that doesn't look like dog pubes

that doesn't attract pedophiles

it's a terrible mustache

anyway

stupid people are often courageous

but less often masters of the Kung Fu

the dog pube mustache thing is debatable

Author's Note

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[drcornelius]

Looking forward to reading more of your stuff. I think I can learn from you. I'm going to have to sit with this piece for awhile. I think the content is simple but it is the structure that interests me.