Manufactured Calamity

Manufactured Calamity

A Poem by Davidgeo
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incompatible on purpose

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Privatization, the masters of faux efficiency

Reports published on benchmarks

Positive trends pre-agreed upon

"care about yourself, you'll care about your neighbor"

Corporations are people, people


Nationalization, the keys to corruption

Secrets upon secrets hiding more secrets

Calming manufactured calamities

"care about your country, you'll care about yourself"

Governments are gods, elected


Machinistic economic efficiency

Collateral damages

Slaves to ruthless margins

Asking only the right questions

(shareholder's meeting)


Idealistic humanistic efficiency

Standardized livings

Slaves to the common mediocrities

Answering only the right questions

(national security)


Ruthless efficiency

Running the paper game

"Rippin 'n runnin"

Like Omar


Mindless bureaucracy

Politcal f*****g cartels

On the power play

Like Messier


Gunning for market shares or gunning for capital chairs

'Care about yourself'

'Care about your country'

S**t's incompatible on purpose


The wrong people are caring

Have been for some time now....

© 2016 Davidgeo


Author's Note

Davidgeo

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My tongue is tripping over itself trying to quickly articulate my thoughts on this piece, but then I realized I wouldn't be reviewing, Id be expressing my opinions and questions on the subject of the poem. (After all these years, too! Just shows you how oblivious I can be.) So, to the writing-
Manufactured Calamity, a brilliant title, very appropriate for this subject. I have noticed that so many times, your words bring the writer's mind to the attention of an important social or political subject that the reader needed to be reminded to contemplate. As if the reader knew about it but forgot they knew about it and how could they forget? Am I making any sense here?? I feel like my brain is stuttering.
I think your word choices in this are great. Very descriptive for a subject that is difficult to describe without resorting to the plain and simple "a******s!"
I laughed out loud after reading the fifth stanza.
I have to ask, did you consciously plan for a poetry site to be your arena or did it just sort of happen and you know a good thing...?
The review, the review! Subject, words, descriptions, grammar, spelling-all praiseworthy.


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

I came to shame the psychopaths... I stay because I am a better version of psychopath and it's fun t.. read more
Barbara Walker

8 Years Ago

I did forget to mention the word "bureaucracy" needs correcting. Practice, practice! lol
Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

Ah... thanks. I never spell that right.



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My tongue is tripping over itself trying to quickly articulate my thoughts on this piece, but then I realized I wouldn't be reviewing, Id be expressing my opinions and questions on the subject of the poem. (After all these years, too! Just shows you how oblivious I can be.) So, to the writing-
Manufactured Calamity, a brilliant title, very appropriate for this subject. I have noticed that so many times, your words bring the writer's mind to the attention of an important social or political subject that the reader needed to be reminded to contemplate. As if the reader knew about it but forgot they knew about it and how could they forget? Am I making any sense here?? I feel like my brain is stuttering.
I think your word choices in this are great. Very descriptive for a subject that is difficult to describe without resorting to the plain and simple "a******s!"
I laughed out loud after reading the fifth stanza.
I have to ask, did you consciously plan for a poetry site to be your arena or did it just sort of happen and you know a good thing...?
The review, the review! Subject, words, descriptions, grammar, spelling-all praiseworthy.


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

I came to shame the psychopaths... I stay because I am a better version of psychopath and it's fun t.. read more
Barbara Walker

8 Years Ago

I did forget to mention the word "bureaucracy" needs correcting. Practice, practice! lol
Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

Ah... thanks. I never spell that right.

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