The Benefit of Lust

thanks to all those too hot for me to touch type ladies.....

Gift for the never haves

Never will bes

For whatever reasons

         take your nothing

You can get a glance

You can stare

You can even take a picture

     drink your salt water

Gift of masturbatory fodder

Self lover

Neurotic loving its own reason

                   go to sleep

You can dream of things

That will not happen....

  (beware the nightmare)

Accept the risk

          it doesn't matter

You can always wake up

To fall back asleep

No shortage of lust

              no, not in here

Reviews

[freemantle]

Morning numbnuts.

See you're still churning out crap and still mostly getting ignored.
You're either thick skinned or simply thick. x

[Davidgeo]

Ugh... you guys are really unimaginative... copy and paste gets copy and paste "Oh boy, ANTO's back. Are you ready to embarrass yourself again? DId Relic, John Gabriel and Wordman convince you to come back or is this a decision you made on your own? You're the only t**d masters that do this s**t. The cancer of this café. Had you in remission for a while, looks like your back though."

[Khalil Jibran]

nicely structured dude... this stuff is tight!!!

[L_]

Interesting piece, I love the way you have structured the poem. Your tone and length of line makes the piece more accessible to the reader. Unusual presentation of your topic. Good job.

[Davidgeo]

Thank yous. I still haven't figured out how to spell masturbatory without spell check. It's been one of my goals for sometime now.

[L_]

Try spelling it out :P

[Davidgeo]

Isn't that kinda what I'm already doing?

Spelling masturbation.