I See You

I See You

A Poem by Davidgeo
"

that very prototypical See you next Tuesday. (get a job b*tch)

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Intellectually I seem to threaten you


With my crassness

My, dare devil unpleasantness


I'm not so silly you know...

My dear 

Perhaps this silly joker has some depth with his jokes

Layers for us, for all of us... more to see


(sigh)


I see you there...

Whining,

Scheming

Contriving all that furious passive and sensible

 rage (in a cage)

Against nothing

"Occupy self"


(sigh)


It's not really a movement

Your streets are imagined

I'm actually your friend

....

Silly clown tears

....


What if I'm not that thing?

Though...

What if I am precisely who I claim to be?



So....


Intellectually you seem to fear me..

Because I might be right?

You're insecure

And certainly beneath me.

(no more questions)

And...

Because I do so much love the fight....

I'll let you sniff me

All you like; taste me darling... enjoy my venom.


Be my prey

Congratulations.

© 2016 Davidgeo


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what if I'm your friend. What if I'm going to sprout fangs and talons and eat you. Sheep are stupid. Goats are smart. Who usually gets it in the end? Goats. Perhaps you're a sheepdog. And sometimes you can't help taking a nip - getting a mouthful of wool.
"Intellectually I seem to threaten you."
Stellar line.
Why do toddlers eat dishwasher pods? Because they aren't smart enough yet to understand that not all things small and bright are candy. Unfortunately, the world is rife with adult sized toddlers.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

Eh... friends are a crutch.

And I'm no dog.

I'd be cat of some kind. .. read more



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what if I'm your friend. What if I'm going to sprout fangs and talons and eat you. Sheep are stupid. Goats are smart. Who usually gets it in the end? Goats. Perhaps you're a sheepdog. And sometimes you can't help taking a nip - getting a mouthful of wool.
"Intellectually I seem to threaten you."
Stellar line.
Why do toddlers eat dishwasher pods? Because they aren't smart enough yet to understand that not all things small and bright are candy. Unfortunately, the world is rife with adult sized toddlers.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

Eh... friends are a crutch.

And I'm no dog.

I'd be cat of some kind. .. read more
It's not bad, but for some reason, things don't seem to make a lot of sense around the end of a couple stanzas.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

Really? Maybe I'll re word it some more, I'm trying to be super duper abstract. The gist of this is.. read more
Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

(edit - I'm NOT trying to be super duper abstract
The Poet of Black Wings

8 Years Ago

Well, that's a lot of fun.

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Added on April 17, 2016
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